Comments by All Members
- ""tha" really took away from this. though i gotta say i didnt find much in it anyway. so keep the "tha" if you like. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "So it seems" by HeLlSeND
- "Awesome rhyme and meter. Very strong. And the message is always a question I have. Excellent write. "
Posted by Unknown on "Truth" by HeLlSeND
- "I could see this sung in the style of Bright Eyes... it's very Conor-Oberst-y. Nicely done... and I like how you break the scheme at the ending; it gives it some additional emphasis."
Posted by stormtalk on "Truth" by HeLlSeND
- "yeah, isn't it grand what we do to the one thing that gives us every single thing we own today? talk about a serious case of biting the hand that feeds you. this was great; powerful and, to the point, and from the heart"
Posted by Unknown on "Earth" by HeLlSeND
- "lol fuckin wicked; you definitely did your emotions justice with this, cuz i felt each and every line in the back of my head. if you can't kill 'em for real, easy solution: kill 'em some other way. "
Posted by Unknown on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND
- "great awareness expressed... excellent expression... powerful piece... yet for me the last 4 lines could have gone more for the jugular... keep elevating your skills!"
Posted by Mr King on "Earth" by HeLlSeND
- "my thoughts exactly. just rhymed a hell of a lot better. sweet poem Hell"
Posted by Skye on "Religion" by HeLlSeND
- "ooo....what a neat texture! Flow was like something out of a night time poetry reading at a 24/7 beatnick coffee shop!!Great poem. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "All You Had?" by HeLlSeND
- "wow i love it, reminds me of some song, i dont know which one though lol.. but yep i love how its written all short like that .. i agree with urban too, i love that part "Dismissing my love as ants pissing on green leaves of nothing""
Posted by yslehc on "All You Had?" by HeLlSeND
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