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  • ""tha" really took away from this. though i gotta say i didnt find much in it anyway. so keep the "tha" if you like. -Glass"
    Posted by glasshouse on "So it seems" by HeLlSeND
  • "Awesome rhyme and meter. Very strong. And the message is always a question I have. Excellent write. "
    Posted by Unknown on "Truth" by HeLlSeND
  • "I could see this sung in the style of Bright Eyes... it's very Conor-Oberst-y. Nicely done... and I like how you break the scheme at the ending; it gives it some additional emphasis."
    Posted by stormtalk on "Truth" by HeLlSeND
  • "Beautifully bled through in words. Emotional and sad yet hopeful and doubtful. Loved it."
    Posted by Butterfly on "Ode To Love" by HeLlSeND
  • "yeah, isn't it grand what we do to the one thing that gives us every single thing we own today? talk about a serious case of biting the hand that feeds you. this was great; powerful and, to the point, and from the heart"
    Posted by Unknown on "Earth" by HeLlSeND
  • "lol fuckin wicked; you definitely did your emotions justice with this, cuz i felt each and every line in the back of my head. if you can't kill 'em for real, easy solution: kill 'em some other way. "
    Posted by Unknown on "Die, Bitch, Die" by HeLlSeND
  • "great awareness expressed... excellent expression... powerful piece... yet for me the last 4 lines could have gone more for the jugular... keep elevating your skills!"
    Posted by Mr King on "Earth" by HeLlSeND
  • "my thoughts exactly. just rhymed a hell of a lot better. sweet poem Hell"
    Posted by Skye on "Religion" by HeLlSeND
  • "ooo....what a neat texture! Flow was like something out of a night time poetry reading at a 24/7 beatnick coffee shop!!Great poem. ~JMDW~"
    Posted by CharlottesWeb on "All You Had?" by HeLlSeND
  • "wow i love it, reminds me of some song, i dont know which one though lol.. but yep i love how its written all short like that .. i agree with urban too, i love that part "Dismissing my love as ants pissing on green leaves of nothing""
    Posted by yslehc on "All You Had?" by HeLlSeND
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