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Earth
By HeLlSeND
It breathes, it feeds
It festers, it bleeds
We piss in it’s veins
And walk on it’s back
It’s aware that we’re there
It waits to attack
So patiently resting
Just hoping to heal
We beat at it’s skin
Not knowing it feels
But when the wrath comes
We act so amazed
Dumbfounded and blind
We stand in a daze
Asking a fiction
To assist with a fact
If god did reply
You’d still be off track
The reason is simple
And we’re blind to see
That raping her soul
Will not set us free
So why then continue
This endless assault
And then get pissed off
When it’s solely our fault
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Copyright 2003 HeLlSeND
Published on Friday, September 26, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, June 11, 2004, WikidGrrl
(26)
wrote:
the slow is amazing...great job expressing...DiE~aNa
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A former member wrote:
yeah, isn't it grand what we do to the one thing that gives us every single thing we own today? talk about a serious case of biting the hand that feeds you. this was great; powerful and, to the point, and from the heart
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On Saturday, December 27, 2003, Mr King
(547) wrote:
great awareness expressed... excellent expression... powerful piece... yet for me the last 4 lines could have gone more for the jugular... keep elevating your skills!
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
aah your the one who wrote this.. i read it awhile ago and havnt been able to find it because i forgot the title.. love it, great write..tis goin on my favorites
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A former member wrote:
I love it. I completely love it. I've tried writing something like this but it just didn't come out the way I wanted it to. This is amazing though.
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On Sunday, September 28, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...wow...I like the way you wrote this...really makes one think...nicely done... -Darun
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A former member wrote:
I totally agree with this work - i like the way you make Earth a person so it really makes you think how bad it is to harm it.
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