Poetry....although this isn't a good example of said poetry
By HeLlSeND
Never apologize and never stop writing
for as long as your living, you're already fighting
so fuck what they say cause they'll never know
your feelings inside are the truth, let them show
They separate you from the shallow and rude
they allow you release, so do what you do
and never stop living and never back down
forget all the naysayers, who needs them around
as long as you struggle you'll always inspire
For the moment you stop is the moment the pyre
that burns in your soul flames up out of control
Then there is no escape from this infinite hole
So never be sorry and never stop writing
for as long as your living, you're already fighting
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Copyright 2003 HeLlSeND
Published on Saturday, August 30, 2003.
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, saellem
(21) wrote:
good job
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On Monday, March 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
this is definately the truth, every poet needs to realize...well said!
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Yes well said
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On Saturday, January 8, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Rock on.
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On Monday, December 1, 2003, UnsilentMajority
(18) wrote:
my ass this is not a good example its better then my works this is going in the bookmarks!!!
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Drifter
(265) wrote:
nice write. keep it up.
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On Saturday, September 27, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
This made my passion for writing boil up....amazing read...you have said it perfectly.
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On Tuesday, September 9, 2003, Kittichoo
(37) wrote:
Thankyou...
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On Friday, September 5, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Yes.. tell em man.. its so true... Monkey
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On Friday, September 5, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
I LOVE this . . I read it a few days ago and I thought I commented then . . the first two and last two lines are absolutely incredible . . this write made me feel GOOD, made me feel strong. Wonderful write.
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A former member wrote:
Hey...this is nice. Very promising...Off to read more!
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Yea great msg. In this one. Your bring it to life nicely. Good work. Tiger
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
good for you, i hope everyone sees this because i only recently developed my own style, my new style is "i dont give a fuck what you say andrew style" haha, good write! *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
yes I love all your rhyming schemes. not alot of people can us them, but you use them well. This one reminds me of an old one of mine... maybe I’ll go find it. Thanks I’d forgotten about it. Anyway enjoyed your write. ~gothic~
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On Sunday, August 31, 2003, HeLlSeND
(40) wrote:
hey, will ya send me a copy or at least let me know when ya got it posted
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, anathema
(50) wrote:
it rhymes! and it has rhythm! oh i heart you, welcome to dp! :) lol... i love the message you send too... i'm not usually a fan of rhyming work, but this has soul... it sings rampant in the hearts of poets, burning...
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, anathema
(50) wrote:
just fix yer profile, you bum... this is an angst free zone, no wallowing. :) you're in, so far we like you... so no putting yourself down. ::cracks whip::
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, HeLlSeND
(40) wrote:
Thanks.....is my profile better now?