Poetry....although this isn't a good example of said poetry

By HeLlSeND

Never apologize and never stop writing
for as long as your living, you're already fighting
so fuck what they say cause they'll never know
your feelings inside are the truth, let them show
They separate you from the shallow and rude
they allow you release, so do what you do
and never stop living and never back down
forget all the naysayers, who needs them around
as long as you struggle you'll always inspire
For the moment you stop is the moment the pyre
that burns in your soul flames up out of control
Then there is no escape from this infinite hole
So never be sorry and never stop writing
for as long as your living, you're already fighting

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Copyright 2003 HeLlSeND
Published on Saturday, August 30, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • saellem On Thursday, June 23, 2005, saellem (21)By person wrote:

    good job

  • The Crimson Queen On Monday, March 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    this is definately the truth, every poet needs to realize...well said!

  • Serenity On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Yes well said

  • stormtalk On Saturday, January 8, 2005, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    Rock on.

  • UnsilentMajority On Monday, December 1, 2003, UnsilentMajority (19)By person wrote:

    my ass this is not a good example its better then my works this is going in the bookmarks!!!

  • Drifter On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Drifter (268)By person wrote:

    nice write. keep it up.

  • maddin foxxxy On Saturday, September 27, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    This made my passion for writing boil up....amazing read...you have said it perfectly.

  • Kittichoo On Tuesday, September 9, 2003, Kittichoo (37)By person wrote:

    Thankyou...

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, September 5, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Yes.. tell em man.. its so true... Monkey

  • cre On Friday, September 5, 2003, cre (411)By person wrote:

    I LOVE this . . I read it a few days ago and I thought I commented then . . the first two and last two lines are absolutely incredible . . this write made me feel GOOD, made me feel strong. Wonderful write.

  • A former member wrote: Hey...this is nice. Very promising...Off to read more!

  • Blinded_Tiger On Saturday, August 30, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Yea great msg. In this one. Your bring it to life nicely. Good work. Tiger

  • _Andrew_ On Saturday, August 30, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    good for you, i hope everyone sees this because i only recently developed my own style, my new style is "i dont give a fuck what you say andrew style" haha, good write! *~*aNDReW*~*

  • GothicBlack On Saturday, August 30, 2003, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    yes I love all your rhyming schemes. not alot of people can us them, but you use them well. This one reminds me of an old one of mine... maybe I’ll go find it. Thanks I’d forgotten about it. Anyway enjoyed your write. ~gothic~

  • HeLlSeND On Sunday, August 31, 2003, HeLlSeND (40)By person wrote:

    hey, will ya send me a copy or at least let me know when ya got it posted

  • anathema On Saturday, August 30, 2003, anathema (50)By person wrote:

    it rhymes! and it has rhythm! oh i heart you, welcome to dp! :) lol... i love the message you send too... i'm not usually a fan of rhyming work, but this has soul... it sings rampant in the hearts of poets, burning...

  • anathema On Saturday, August 30, 2003, anathema (50)By person wrote:

    just fix yer profile, you bum... this is an angst free zone, no wallowing. :) you're in, so far we like you... so no putting yourself down. ::cracks whip::

  • HeLlSeND On Saturday, August 30, 2003, HeLlSeND (40)By person wrote:

    Thanks.....is my profile better now?

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