Comments by All Members
- "I like the line 'Why don't you think twice before you pull my trigger?' i could ask that question to quite a few people hehe. nice writing. i like it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Fix Yourself" by brokensme
- "Simple and sweet. I really like the way you set this poem up, and I love the simplicity of it. "Through the holes in my heart and the chains on my soul, This I know I live for you". LOVE those lines(:"
Posted by Unknown on "I Live For You" by brokensme
- "Ah the familiar sting of denial's bite.....It sucks. This poem has a nice flow to it. I really like it"
Posted by Unknown on "Denial" by brokensme
- "Good God! Just nearly caught me on the verge of tears at the end. The way you express emotions and feelings, i've never seen it expressed this well. U truly hav a gift. Loved this. Keep it up."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Death by Corruption" by brokensme
- "And all those who've never gone thru that have no idea that pain and suffering. Not just physically, but worst of all, emotionally. It kills the person you once were, and you can never be that person again. Liked tha write, it moved me. Again, i kno tha feeling. . ."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Dying in Her Pain" by brokensme
- "I can so totally relate to this. "Buried in their ideas of a perfect child", yea, went thru that. Hec, im still in it. Really good write, lots of emotion. Short and sweet. Enjoyed it alot;)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "i'm lost again" by brokensme
- "o.o no more readingg my thoughts for you or ill leave your pocket...dude seriously you bout made me cry...good work but get outta my head not a good place for you be ;) "
Posted by Unknown on "My Ultimatum" by brokensme
- "love it xD i hate when moms follow you all over and runs you over with stuff >.< makes me want to go phew phew phew with my laser pointers "
Posted by Unknown on "Why I Don't Like Snow" by brokensme
- "Lmao x) stuff like this is why you are my best friend >.> when I need a laugh you deliver ^.^ yay anyways this is very good but what a horrible dream o.o >.> your mom wouldn't do that "
Posted by Unknown on "Why I Don't Like Snow" by brokensme
- "The destructive power of rage? and that strange impossibility to break a rotten relation?
Pictured vivid.
Thank you,
Pavel
"
Posted by Unknown on "Dying in Her Pain" by brokensme
- "I like the bravado, In every break up there is always heart ache and sometimes
someone comes thru it better than
the other. I like the way there is an exceptance of the out come and an eagerness to get on with what is coming next. well done! "
Posted by alex herewane on "Her Final Good-Bye" by brokensme
- ""the last image you see is your allies, brothers and mate"...been there many times (metaphorically).. it use to enrage me.. now it just zeros me out like an emotional flatline. comfortably cold. nicely said."
Posted by elisa on "The Ultimate Betrayal" by brokensme
