Denial

By brokensme

Broken down inside
Not once showng the tears I cry
I fell for you
Only to find out there is 2
Now again i wait
Crushed once more by denial

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Copyright 2011 brokensme
Published on Sunday, July 3, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Regnhild On Saturday, June 9, 2012, Regnhild (13)By person wrote:

    Denial's bitter call ... pain enrobes you while you read this.. thank you for sharing.

  • BrokenKatra On Saturday, May 26, 2012, BrokenKatra (61)By person wrote:

    It is simply and yet very complex. You have seemed to capture the moment perfectly.

  • MikeShank1989 On Sunday, July 3, 2011, MikeShank1989 (92)By person wrote:

    Simple and heartbreaking. Perfect length. Well-written piece.

  • A former member wrote: Ah the familiar sting of denial's bite.....It sucks. This poem has a nice flow to it. I really like it

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