Her Final Good-Bye

By brokensme

What were we thinking?
The truth should never be hidden

I covered the problems with drinking
You covered them with your burdens

We promised forever
but forever was always lost

Once I realized I’ll see you never
This became a sacrifice of unknown cost

So now we go our separate ways
With no final good-bye

But this is the day
I start to fix this shattered heart of mine

So good-by my love
Go shed your tears

I will not suffer your pain
after our 2 years


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Copyright 2010 brokensme
Published on Tuesday, December 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Loved it!!! Brought back some old memories. Very nice write my friend.

  • ArcticWolf999 On Monday, May 16, 2011, ArcticWolf999 (55)By person wrote:

    I like this.

  • alex herewane On Tuesday, December 21, 2010, alex herewane (150)By person wrote:

    I like the bravado, In every break up there is always heart ache and sometimes someone comes thru it better than the other. I like the way there is an exceptance of the out come and an eagerness to get on with what is coming next. well done!

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