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- ""Your eyes they weigh like bricks all over me" Here's my pen, here are my pages... let me draw words for you; then, perhaps, you'll compose some back for me. time for a drink, as i crawl"
Posted by Unknown on "Sober Up" by maddin foxxxy
- ""What I wouldn't
give for someone else
to hold this pen and write" *sits in awe* ~Drea~
"
Posted by Drea on "Sober Up" by maddin foxxxy
- "the verse that starts off as As I breathe, really grabs me. I typically do drown my thoughts until they are outside of me or at least I try. Great write again hun. *hugs* OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Sober Up" by maddin foxxxy
- "great poem. "I don't know where it's going to... where i'm going to crash into..." made me feel kinda dizzy. i like the feeling that comes across."
Posted by xX pretty vacant Xx on "Sober Up" by maddin foxxxy
- "I like this. The funny thing is that I'm drunk right now. Really, really drunk. But even when I'm sober, I'll still think this is a good write"
Posted by Lost_Soul on "Sober Up" by maddin foxxxy
- "There is a softness and sadness to the rhythm of your poems that caresses and slows my pulse. It is as if you wrap your hand around my heart and gently squeeze your words into my being. And there is no judgment in them, only patient and wise observations."
Posted by Stranger on "Of Saints and Sin" by maddin foxxxy
- ""It was the violin
by the corner
in the street that
started the melody...." BEAUTIFUL..."
Posted by Unknown on "Clock" by maddin foxxxy
- "foxxxy, you opened my eyes wide shut to this beautiful composition; wide shut as I can see the imagery behind my closed eyes, "Visible perchance
inside...""
Posted by Unknown on "Eyes Open" by maddin foxxxy
- ""At the other side
of the glassed window
there is a moon" this is absolutely beautiful; your words moved and stirred my soul, gracefully, like butterfly wings..."
Posted by Unknown on "Eyes Open" by maddin foxxxy
- ""to appear
as the witch breaking your dawn" it's difficult to see you in this light, but the poetry is splendid, and yur reasons are yours..."
Posted by Unknown on "Of Saints and Sin" by maddin foxxxy
- "its strange i was reading this and it felt like i was reading MY own story. i dont know of any words that would show my gratitude and love of this work ~Drea~
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Posted by Drea on "Of Saints and Sin" by maddin foxxxy
- "This is awesome!!! I feel you've opened my mind to something I couldn't quite put my finger on for a long time. Plus, I love the originality and perspective on this piece. You continue to amaze me!"
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Of Saints and Sin" by maddin foxxxy
- "i like the ying yang feel of this. I can relate when I internalized the emotions... I have a constant struggle with my saint and sinner on the inside. great write hun. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Of Saints and Sin" by maddin foxxxy
- "beautiful. reminds me of an old flame... love is a hell of a ride, so much so that if one isn't careful he/she can forget everything else, and that's.... bad, real real bad. thx much"
Posted by Unknown on "Before You Love Me" by maddin foxxxy
- "*sniff* Seems like these kind of poems are really getting to me today. I understand this though...*soft laugh* I understand it all too well."
Posted by Unknown on "Of Saints and Sin" by maddin foxxxy
- "You continue to blow me away. I am so often stunned by your work. There is such an intimacy in your poems. They make me feel that I right there with you; feeling what you are feeling. Loved the December metaphor. It gave me a chill."
Posted by Stranger on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
- "This is a great poem... I especially like the fourth stanza - that's beautifully observed. well done! :) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
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