Comments by All Members
- "The emotion put into this piece is painfully beautiful. It started vividly and "ended with a point." If I had to pick out the parts I enjoyed, I'd be repeating the entire poem. Nicely done."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "It ends with a point ." by maddin foxxxy
- "by the third stanza I was totally engrossed and felt simply overwhelmed by the sadness that cries out from this piece. "I kept it shut
I think I loved you
I wouldn't know how to tell". I repeat, Wow.
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Posted by flying_fox on "It ends with a point ." by maddin foxxxy
- "I never love
I only waste
I never love .. this was so sad...but beautifully expressed...i feel like it's a painful retrospective...but you are moving on...and it's not easy *afraid*
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Posted by girlafraid on "It ends with a point ." by maddin foxxxy
- "..a heartbeat can't be trusted as a measure of time... sometimes the heart will skip a beat... sometimes it races... But there are times when a moment seems to short... or far too long..."
Posted by OLd SouL on "A Song For the Lost One" by maddin foxxxy
- "i love the flow of this, absorbing and deep, beautiful the 8th stanza especially, feels like the poem is whispered in a way, mezmorizing work"
Posted by Anth on "A Song For the Lost One" by maddin foxxxy
- "this poem invokes vivid images of childhood...once again, you are brilliant...and i agree with purr_verse regarding that verse..it's also my favorite...awesome...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Aid to the chilD" by maddin foxxxy
- "great imagery, both original and vivid... a poignantly emotional piece with a fantastic conclusion...soft and painful simultaneously... and i really love "waiting maKes her wonder
wonder makes her need" especially. :)
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Posted by purr_verse on "Aid to the chilD" by maddin foxxxy
- " it just aches
from the time she is born
till the last mistake...
wow...new favorite...this one made me smile, remembering that childhood simplicity...*afraid*
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Posted by girlafraid on "Aid to the chilD" by maddin foxxxy
- "'She's painted in plastic threads' Where do you come up with this stuff? This one amazes me... I've read it like 5 times so far.. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Aid to the chilD" by maddin foxxxy
- "I tried to write something similar to this but it didn't come out right.. I'm glad it didn't.. because I found this. And it delves deeper than I could ever convey. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Claro de Luna" by maddin foxxxy
- ""Torn as it may seem The drapes are on
the floor the water's drowning whole
and floating by there are all the faces
I have worn" this stanza hit me deeply...for no matter what face you have on, in your poetry you will always be beautiful...-l-
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Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Dirty Looks & Adrenaline" by maddin foxxxy
- "'and floating by there are
all the faces
I have worn' I love that line.. as well as others in this poem. I like the feeling the conclusion has. Inviting and intriguing. :::OLd
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Posted by OLd SouL on "Dirty Looks & Adrenaline" by maddin foxxxy
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