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"yup..brilliance"
Posted by hate_doll on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey

"wonderuflly odd (but totally working) rhythm."
Posted by hate_doll on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"this a hot comment."
Posted by hate_doll on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"unique and penetrating, the language you use makes it whimsically vibrant, though also concrete. plus I love the word subterfuge and major points for incorporating such an awesome word!"
Posted by hate_doll on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"the language and flow of this is wonderful, elegant and sweeping as it tumbles through and around the mind, provoking thought and reflection... *cheers*"
Posted by NikesRain on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"abstract......metaphors.....drawing one in......................well done................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"Comment on Monkeys works you bastards! Just cous I spam my thoughts here dosnt mean you should not comment!"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"ohh btw I know the knight and trickster may be outsiders but I dont give a shit, they are in you both as archetypes. Infact more then any other I know. Tiger "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"Well there is that and then there is some fine images that are more personal and that I will like when you explain em."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"Mostly taking one stand but its realy your monkey playing your ego and your ego bashing your monkey in a lovely eternal dance."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"Full circle and shit eh? Its a connection if nothing els. And what I find interesting here is your trickster knight game, cous I know you circle alot around it."
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

""mind over matter" ~ "Blind sight companion" ... "man hunts his... ""... knowing you had to disagree" ~ "A tricksters tribute" "A "knight oh so valliant"
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"The dogs of hospice, a little twist for me and a joke, and yet a brilliant conclusion as well...the tribute of a trickster gave man fire and life..."
Posted by Solace on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"I enjoyed the profound conjunctions, the characteristic two by two waterfall...I especially loved he pause and timbre of the "on the fourth day""
Posted by Solace on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

""Curtain fall, kiss- Domino conjunction" Outstanding line there! The piece as a whole was really great. It's those kind of thoughts that remind us we are everchanging. Hind sight is 20/20, afterall. Thanks for the point to this kind sir. ;) Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"a muse mangled poet ...perhaps... caught in a moment of clarity..... torn thoughts pieced into words.... a tug-of-war in mind.........just.. wow... this drilled straight through my consciousness."
Posted by elisa on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"This was incredible I loved the words, they rocked you against a shore. ~Gothic"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"This is a good poem. Good write."
Posted by Unknown on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"i love to fistfuck wyrms and worms and worries....you speak to me like an old sermun...if you ever come to NYC lets fuck...jamacan style"
Posted by Clementine on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"at first glance.. a meaningless jumble of words..but then I really read it..and I have to say that I'm impressed. such originality!"
Posted by Mathesix on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey

"you always know how to say so much with not saying really that much...this is an amazing write brother full of creativity and wordplay....always a pleasure to read your works....-chris"
Posted by knightmirror on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"wow i love the line "Crystal tear on ravens back" it hit me and held a meaning to me, maybe not the meaning you intended but meaning all the same. it's good to see you are still writeing"
Posted by Aurora_Light on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"Soul searching pulse of surreal semi-introspective mime poetry, Panto-play on language,texture, originality and snsibility. Crazy parader. "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey

"new age narcisstic tosh. My kind of write."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey

"some hieroglyphic catharsis drnched in carouche poetic symantics odf osund and precision as to aallegorise the senses into mythical representation. Nibble me senses."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey

".....breath taking.....i love your originality in your style and the words you chose.....great write..."
Posted by vaultgrl on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey

".....i run into the wall everyday....great write...mimes are just lucky they can see it and don't keep making the mistakes of running into walls over and over...."
Posted by vaultgrl on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey

"twas brillig and the slimy toves to gyre and gimble in the wabe."
Posted by Guillotine on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"twas brillig.ness.. ..such the jabberwock; this meanderingly maddens the mind and softstrokes the subconcious soul into a full throbbing submission; THOSE INGENIOUS IMAGES>>> [incredible] ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

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