Comments by All Members
- "I've been on the street 3 times but never for any great duration. I took the hustler route rather than the scrounging route. Both can be devastating. Great write. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Homeless" by forgottenwish
- "Ahh the procrastination at the end.. of putting it off until later.
It's a deadly game to wait until the last minute. "
Posted by Unknown on "Homeless" by forgottenwish
- "I love the simplicity, and that's a really good idea. I don't have much else to say. I really like this. I wonder why no one has commented on it yet."
Posted by Octopus on "color blind fool " by forgottenwish
- "Very very well written. I must say your use of imagery and strong words really made me shiver. The kind of chill that makes a polar bear shiver, now that made me shiver and I just came in from shoveling snow. What a wonderful giver you have a talent not to be wasted. Keep the great work up."
Posted by Angramis on "just a kid " by forgottenwish
- "our emotional extremes get the best of us at times, but I always try to remember that they are just that. extreme feelings are only temporay for most of us, thank god. welcome to dp :)"
Posted by Patches on "Socially award " by forgottenwish
- "it almost felt like a world of chaos, a world of anarchy, could feel the fire creeping towards me begging me to go bad. wonderful write cheers! welcome to dp"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "rusting ideals " by forgottenwish
- "the pauses were somewhat awkward in places, I couldnt really find a flow.. we all get better with each work though. welcome to dp, nice write I hope to see more! "
Posted by poe_lover28 on "Socially award " by forgottenwish
- "Very nice composition. I'm colorblind in a different way: only one race, the human race, so black, white, red...they're all cool to me. 10"
Posted by megaprime81 on "color blind fool " by forgottenwish
- "that stack of paper could represent a multitude of causes for stress ... work , exams or unpaid bills or simply a metaphor for mental confusion and worries piling up , reflected in ones surroundings...I got an image of you as that skittles guy and when you smash it there's a rainbow cascade... :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Stack of paper on my desk" by forgottenwish
- "You should never blame yourself... there's no such thing as a "broken home" in my opinion...it's called reality. People seldom last forever these days...and things are never perfect in families..the ones who look perfect try REALLY hard to trick people in to believing it is..including themselves. nice write xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on " broke the home " by forgottenwish
- "'normal ' families are as rare as hens' teeth from my experience...no individual should have to shoulder the blame , everyone takes a part ... "
Posted by kinkifrog on " broke the home " by forgottenwish
- "Insightful piece and personal FW, don't let the world lay guilt trips at your doorstep, life is one long adventure, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on " broke the home " by forgottenwish
- "Its not your fault, you didnt break the home... Families are disfunctional, even perfect to the eye are messed up behind closed doors. Good read, well done"
Posted by MissAngelic on " broke the home " by forgottenwish
