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just a kid
By forgottenwish
this kid he feels sick not an liness
more like a cold chill
no its more like spine chilling chill
the type of chill that cripples polar bears
im not saying this kid is insain
im saying he needs help
an emotionaly unstable
ball of emotion ready to bust
this kid he needs me but i cant help
i look at him and he cant even see me
a memory a dream a fading fantasy
this kid he more like me than me
i see him even when i dont want too
i wake from the moring wash my face
shave my beard and for moment this kid
he is a fading mememory of me
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Copyright 2014 forgottenwish
Published on Wednesday, February 12, 2014.
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"Poetry"
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On Thursday, February 13, 2014, Angramis
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wrote:
Very very well written. I must say your use of imagery and strong words really made me shiver. The kind of chill that makes a polar bear shiver, now that made me shiver and I just came in from shoveling snow. What a wonderful giver you have a talent not to be wasted. Keep the great work up.
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A former member wrote:
Well written...
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