Comments by All Members
- "Damn dude..harsh..to be under your spinning figure..next to your haunting flashing shadow that flickers through the lighting..pretty vivid..blood and rain..the black of night.. that's how it sounds to me..besides some spelling errors..this was conveyed very well "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Bloody Rain" by draco5445
- "awww omg =O..this was heartbreakingly sincere...im so sorry!...but ur not alone! other teens are suffering in silence as well, ill pray for u!"
Posted by Unknown on "Lonely Road" by draco5445
- "These words resonate the all-to familiar urge, and yet Love which is true shall not be lost forever, but shall to you return, do not lose faith my friend."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "my last day" by draco5445
- "such deep pain... hang in there. we all experience this loss of love. but, like all things in life..... this too shall pass. write on and welcome to dp"
Posted by natalie on "I want....." by draco5445
- "The words pait what you wanted to say. To me I could not find the flow or appeal of the poetry, nothing personal, just my opinion."
Posted by Adam on "Evil Deed" by draco5445
- "I like the rawness and the vividness of it! I hear you when you say that we admit the truth, I hate it when people lie to themselves. Great work"
Posted by Morgoth on "Evil Deed" by draco5445
- "ya that's were the inspiration came from all my friends are stabbing me in the back lately"
Posted by draco5445 on "Traitors" by draco5445
- "A meaningful piece to the heart's weakness, very reflective and full of realism, great write."
Posted by Unknown on "EX's love" by draco5445
- "Perfect example of how pain can be therapeutically in some sense, i am not a cutter, but i do harm myself in punishment for my misdeeds lol nice write"
Posted by Unknown on "Love Me" by draco5445
- "im trying to get out of my addiction of the razor blade. this peice is beautiful to the eyes of a cutter. pure emotion. i love it."
Posted by foreverNalways on "Love Me" by draco5445
- "The truth is he never did get an ribs removed. He's said it quite a few times. I like Manson, but it's all a myth. ...and I agree, Alice Cooper was the first. He made it so Manson can do what he does. This is...interesting."
Posted by Drea on "Freak Show (tribute to Marilyn Manson)" by draco5445
- "This is a very interesting write. Love IS a weak mind because it is up to the person you love to treat it with care. When they don't, it eats you up until you find a way to cure yourself. Cutting off that diseased, weak part is the only way because there really is no cure. You must amputate that part of yourself and rely on the rest to step forward and take control. Thought provoking piece now that you've taken the time to present it properly. Kudos."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Love is a disease" by draco5445
- "I've never been a true cutter, but I'm no stranger to self harm, as well as what you're feeling in this piece, like the only thing that there is is that pain, and so it becomes habitual. This was amazing, thanks for the write."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Love Me" by draco5445
- "Oh man, I was going to do one of these but it looks like you beat me to it. Great one. Happy "marijuana awareness day" :)"
Posted by Unknown on "4:20" by draco5445
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