Slipping away

By draco5445

My life is sliiping into the dark abyss
I'm feeling death's fatal kiss
My soul slowly drains away
I pull to my knees and start to pray
While i pray my soul is fading out
I'm about to give up hope when i hear a shout
I open my eyes and tear streaked face
You see my open eyes and your heart starts to race
You kiss me gently on the lips
I feel like i have been struck with 1000 whips

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Copyright 2010 draco5445
Published on Monday, July 19, 2010.     Filed under: "Lyrics"

Author's Note:

It's not done but i thought i would put it up before i forgot it so if you have any sugestions please let me hear them
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  • HeadpatSlut On Monday, July 19, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    It's very nice tragic and dark, I like it, Much Clown Love ninja. Scholar

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