Evil Deed

By draco5445

Everyone commits an evil deed in their lives
Some are more heinous than others
Some people say that it was their upbringing
Some say it was because they were bullied in school
While others like me admit the truth
We say that we are fucked up in the head
We have lost all of our sanity

Some regret there evil deeds
Some feel terrible and commit suicide
Others like me laugh when the judge or pigs ask if I am sorry for what i did
Me and the others can sleep at night even we just committed the evil deed

The people who say we're going to hell are just fucking stupid
We don't care because most of us don't belive in god or Satan or are satanic
We smile as we sit in court awaiting our sentence
We smile when they say that we get the death penalty
We do not give a shit
We smile as we are tied down and the needles are pushed into our skin
We laugh as they start the machine up and the drugs move through the tubes

We are the ones who commit these evil deeds
We commit them because we love to cause painand we love to kill

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Copyright 2010 draco5445
Published on Thursday, May 13, 2010.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • Adam On Monday, May 17, 2010, Adam (241)By person wrote:

    The words pait what you wanted to say. To me I could not find the flow or appeal of the poetry, nothing personal, just my opinion. Scholar

  • musicalsuicide On Thursday, May 13, 2010, musicalsuicide (58)By person wrote:

    That was awesome...... I love how real it is and how you didn't hold back.

  • Morgoth On Thursday, May 13, 2010, Morgoth (36)By person wrote:

    I like the rawness and the vividness of it! I hear you when you say that we admit the truth, I hate it when people lie to themselves. Great work

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