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  • "Wow well expressed and very true. you are NEVER prepared completely for when the final moments pass. Its nothing like the shit hollywood makes it out to be. A well written work and an honest description of what life and death are really like. "
    Posted by DarkSkies on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
  • "I understand you rachel. maybe not the situation at hand, but i feel you on that. Wonderfully expressed. Thank you for sharing. ohh life is so frail."
    Posted by TyrantAvDetForbannet on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
  • "I do relate to this, very much. As, again.. I imagine that many of us can. I once heard somebody say that a parent doesn't deal with the loss of their child, they simply learn to continue living with their grief.. i'd never heard any pain described in this way before, always hearing the age old sentiment that it all gets easier with time. I found the idea of the former more of a comfort because it allowed me to accept that maybe this pain won't ever go away, instead of waiting for the magical day when I wake up and it's all gone away. When you realise and accept that it could always be a part of you it becomes a thousand times lighter to carry. I hope this makes sense and sounds hopeful, as it's meant to.. "
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "on time and mothers and lies" by Rachel
  • "Rachel I love this. My instant thought actually went to the 7/7 terrorist attacks on the London underground of about 6 years ago, for some reason.. you've written this in such a way that it's relateable for so many of us I think.. really, I got something from reading this. And it's important, which I envy. I don't seem to be able to write about important things. well done :)"
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Ambient noise in Joplin, the new normal." by Rachel
  • "This is exactly the kind of thing I needed to read tonight. Real words with real feeling. And though it broke my heart to read, it made me feel something like I have not, for a long time. Thank you for that. ^V^"
    Posted by veingo on "The problem with the dead." by Rachel
  • ""twenty nine cigarettes three Vicodin half a bottle of NyQuil weren't enough to let me rest" LOVE it."
    Posted by Unknown on "Run-on Nightmare" by Rachel
  • " 'People with cameras throw around "Rebuilding" metaphors like dirty bills at a strip club then disappear back to their in tact towns to forget what they've seen.' ... this is too true...they can escape the 'Survivor's Guilt' ... maybe... this took me on a grim train of thought...so many displaced people in the world at the moment...that others are not aware of...or just don't want to know...yesterday... two more earthquakes hit Christchurch in New Zealand... 181 people were killed when an earthquake hit the city just 4 months ago...now 10 000 homes and 1000 businesses will have to be demolished............so sorry to hear you are in the middle of one of these catastrophes Rachel :( ...what seems such a herculean task is already underway though ...sending prayers :)"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Ambient noise in Joplin, the new normal." by Rachel
  • "Well expressed. I hope you are proven wrong and that things do turn around faster than you expect. I think that in that situation I would be compelled to get to work helping clean up just to avoid the despair of inaction. Though even that would seem like a sisyphean task at first, it's all that we can do."
    Posted by DarkPoet on "Ambient noise in Joplin, the new normal." by Rachel
  • "i can not begin to understand how you feel but i know my heart aches to read this... to know you've had and have to go through this... you're loved and important to a great many people... and all we know is you are still here and we're the better for it and glad you are. "
    Posted by NikesRain on "Ambient noise in Joplin, the new normal." by Rachel
  • "love this pic of you!Age? Hobbies? R U hispanic?I'm on Facebook send me friends request through my e-mail andersonjimmy19@yahoo.com"
    Posted by Poetic Warlock on "Cycling Crimes." by Rachel
  • "nothing prepares us for loss, the brave faced veneer leaves tear-stained splinters..I admire your courage in sharing this..shards of glass will always remain. Thank you **bows**"
    Posted by Amphigorist on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
  • "there are no soft words to end a relationship, but the end blow gently softened the impact somewhat. nice write. thanks for sharing."
    Posted by natalie on "Cycling Crimes." by Rachel
  • "A vicious cycle that needs to be broken or else fear the consequences...Fantastic flow, weave and message...What a great triple threat :)"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Cycling Crimes." by Rachel
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