Comments by All Members
- "Brilliant. That last line ends things perfectly like a sad punch line but at the same time I'm intrigued to know how this would have panned out if added to, or maybe that you haven't is entirely the point."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Dimly lit Carnival Ride" by AshtrayDirt
- "Indeed... Caught Me. What can I say, You are very talented. I am amazed this work has no comments... Sad. Good Writes Remain in the Shadows and are only for elite Eyes."
Posted by Unknown on "Fools!" by AshtrayDirt
- "Crazy, surrealist imagery and a cracking title - Fear not, this was more than just a 'rant', this was beautifully exorcised poetry :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "sunfire city" by AshtrayDirt
- "This made me shiver, and i read it again, and still chills crept up my arms. The strength of your words is intoxicating. I just LOVE the last line! Well Done!"
Posted by steuss on "Oblivion" by AshtrayDirt
- "your poetry makes me feels as though every hint of air is gone... and i am gasping to have your glamour.... Sue"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Untitled" by AshtrayDirt
- "Well, unstructured? Gives this deceptive depth, nervy feel while reading, I rather like it as it is. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "sunfire city" by AshtrayDirt
- "capture of a moment that may never end ... twi' said " brutally beautiful .." ... i'll second that .. cool .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Fuck." by AshtrayDirt
- "LOL ... great write ,,, question ... what the fuck? .... this is quite real , and it is everywhere ... they freakin wait on line ...lol ... it is a side effect ... but of what? ... very cool ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "A Dimly lit Carnival Ride" by AshtrayDirt
- "Oblivion would be nice... there seems to be a bit of despair mixed with anger in here, and you brought forth a strong message in here. I liked the rhyme pattern too... sweet work man."
Posted by Skye on "Oblivion" by AshtrayDirt
- "now this is gonna be quite the finish. its got me on the edge of my seat now...eagerly hungering for the end."
Posted by Twilight on "O.o.O" by AshtrayDirt
- "i know it would be typical to say it came out fine. but if the poet isnt happy with their work. then whats the point right? its for you-no one else:)"
Posted by Twilight on "Awake!" by AshtrayDirt
- "im guessing this used to be called disconnected. and why that person felt the need to say that kelly osbourne has a song called the same is beyond me. but this was brutally beautiful as far as your piece goes."
Posted by Twilight on "Fuck." by AshtrayDirt
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