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sunfire city
By AshtrayDirt
laid body over, folded
Blue lined lady
collapsed on top of building blocks
distressed mouth belting red screams
,scrambled egg eyes
in a city among fluttered red color,
drowning in scrambled pixels
sectioned palett life
crimson stoplight sky billows through my weeping willows
veiny light
red plum pit splat
blacked out streets amongst beheaded flowers
stitched seam back makes scars blueprinting hearts
puzzle pieced chromoshome
makes fuzzy face droopy mustache
sunfire woman in a filthy red town.
(*this was just a rant i went on today i haven't structured it or moved
things around at all but i just wanted to put something up so yes this
is very much in progress.*)
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Copyright 2004 AshtrayDirt
Published on Thursday, April 15, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, March 31, 2007, carlosjackal
(3019)
wrote:
Crazy, surrealist imagery and a cracking title - Fear not, this was more than just a 'rant', this was beautifully exorcised poetry :)
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On Monday, May 17, 2004, Mute Serenade
(445) wrote:
the scrambled stanza struck me something fierce... splendid write... sue
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Well, unstructured? Gives this deceptive depth, nervy feel while reading, I rather like it as it is. ~ mw
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