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Awake!
By AshtrayDirt
Awake!Fair child
for the sun has set
Eyes pinned wide
She bleeds into the stars
her body quivers for
the sight of light engulfed in darkness
watching her beloved
warms her unaged blood
Skin of pale rose petals
eyes with coal centers
)in progress...ah i hate this one.._) i cant get it to come out right!)
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Copyright 2003 AshtrayDirt
Published on Tuesday, November 25, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Awake!"
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On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, Stranger
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wrote:
I really like the language in this: "She bleeds into the stars", " Skin of pale rose petals / eyes with coal centers"; intense visuals.
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Good so far. I can't wait to read the finished product.
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