Comments by All Members
- "This was pretty good... I'm usually not a huge fan of rhyme, but you, along with few others here, pull it off well, I liked this...=)"
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "Missing Saints" by Iwas
- "nicely written..loved the flow, rhyme and story behind it. well done. welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "Missing Saints" by Iwas
- "Artful write brother. Always good to see something of this nature being acknowledged also ~Ash"
Posted by Ashteroth on "Missing Saints" by Iwas
- "I had to convince myself this is more fiction, so I can fully enjoy how beautifully composed this piece is, without feeling somewhat guilty in talking highly of such tragedy. With a suspenseful flow, this touches with realistic tones and absolutely fine visuals in their devastating attire. A fantastic piece!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "As welders cry." by Iwas
- "I think the rhyming made this poem what it was and that is powerful on many levels. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Missing Saints" by Iwas
- "this is my favorite of your pieces. its raw and emotional and real. a still life of a stilled life. beautiful in its tragedy."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas
- "I don't always like rhymed and metered poetry, mainly because its so hard to make it truly beautiful. This was a great piece. The title was perfect and the images were crisp and vivid but in a hauntingly dreamlike melody. Beautiful write! I need to read the rest of your works!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Missing Saints" by Iwas
- "Wow, another delicious treat here, you write with great flow, something I'm found of myself. THanks again for yet another lovely piece =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Sad to see you smile." by Iwas
- "Panic and despair. I know what this feels like. I love the way you got it out of your soul."
Posted by SulaMoon on "My mortal hell." by Iwas
- "Love the language and description you use in this piece and, of course, the message and story told...Makes me feel very proud to come from a working class background."
Posted by carlosjackal on "As welders cry." by Iwas
- "I was in prison for five years so i can relate. I have no formal education but you can obviously write."
Posted by man of decay on "My mortal hell." by Iwas
- "you seem to be a prisoner of your mind.. that dark, lonely, deep, maze that creates illusions that can be maddening. hope it was metaphorically intended.
good piece. "
Posted by natalie on "My mortal hell." by Iwas
- ""bouncing off walls like a fly in a jar"..what an image!You have such a cool way of rhyming"
Posted by Unknown on "My mortal hell." by Iwas
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