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"The pain from losing another brings out the best from within us when it comes to writing poetry. At least that's the way it started for me. This is a wonderful heartfelt piece and I felt every breath, fall and hope for recovery. write on:)"
Posted by johnbevan17 on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani

"keep writing and i hope to hear your name big one day!!!! you deserve it>>> i cant spell sorry"
Posted by Unknown on "Silently defiant" by Lylani

"thank you for sharing this one.....from the first lines i was hooked....i will definitely remember to read more of your work....thank you again.....-knight"
Posted by knightmirror on "If I could choose my last breath" by Lylani

"wow....i can't believe this didn't get more feedback....breathtaking to say the least...it hit me right in the heart with past memories of someone and myself....i'm glad i dropped in to read this...****-knight"
Posted by knightmirror on "Take the long way round" by Lylani

"This poem really made me think; betrayel is hard on the person. I sense so much heart-ache. Great write!"
Posted by Mona on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani

"A haunting piece...persecute the lover, embrace the killer...I know this so well...life falls away, into the laps of the hungry--those that sin against sinners--souls, and they devour you, bones and all."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Take my hand, or burn my soul" by Lylani

"take the hand, burn the soul. goes hand in hand it seems, to me..."
Posted by wraith on "Take my hand, or burn my soul" by Lylani

"I can relate to every word. Well written from a male perspective.... like telling someone you love just not quite enough... that you love them just not quite enough.... maybe.... so close, so close.... and still, walk away. There are no words worthy, no. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Sorry Can't Right Betrayal" by Lylani

"such a harsh betrayal ... well expressed feelings here...'Made origami flowers To keep my hands from finding knives' ... love that line...and more strength to you :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani

"I like the ending, living on no matter the pain. Beautiful write."
Posted by pureevil8 on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani

"Beautiful story, only in some cases does something that doesn't kill you makes you stronger. "Made origami flowers to keep my hands away from knives" Amazing line. I thoroughly liked the flow to this piece, write on."
Posted by Unknown on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani

"very moving... the tragedy unfolding within these words... the betrayal, the forsaken, the left behind. Such a humbling read... smoothly composed and expressed. Regifted wings. What do we do when the giver taketh away? Love, such a troubling existence. I can relate to the one who asked, now... such an odd turn of events.... being the bearer of both perspectives... I like how the "I" changes throughout.... at first incomprehensible, and then assertive... perhaps that's the answer.... when the giver takes... we must take another giver... without being afraid, maybe. Thanks, be well "
Posted by Unknown on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani

"Powerful...Really liked the strength shown in this piece, very well written."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Silently defiant" by Lylani

"The title grabbed me immediately and it holds such great meaning..This piece was wonderful in its honesty, a heart lain bare and true. Brilliant stuff."
Posted by carlosjackal on "'Hi' should just mean 'Hello'" by Lylani

"Again you prove so very impressive.. This is what makes me laugh at those who claim they don't belive in love.. Love never goes away; it's the "happily ever after" that one shouldn't belive in.. "undeniable unsustainable", What a perfectly painfull way to say it... ^v^"
Posted by veingo on "'Hi' should just mean 'Hello'" by Lylani

"odd how, after so many years, someone could have such an effect on another... the mere sound of the voice can start the heart a fluttering... even after all the arguments, all the pain... the tearing of the other away... the violence of an unavoidable division of two that were one, entwined to the core.... and battling each other just as deeply. Thank you for this, *of* accomplishment, the raw honesty and feeling is too close to home.... "
Posted by Unknown on "'Hi' should just mean 'Hello'" by Lylani

"i love reading poems i've been trying to put into words myself. the only draw back is i didnt write it. thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Nixx on "'Hi' should just mean 'Hello'" by Lylani

"i really love this(: and the part about the artist as a lover. i do really agree. i love when short poems manage to tell such a bigger story. "
Posted by Unknown on "... because my socks don't match" by Lylani

"..no comments?..on this little gem..one word "Tristiloquy" **Bows**"
Posted by Amphigorist on "Chalk Dust" by Lylani

"the tinge of pain in this piece is sobering. Well written. Makes me remember that love is a four letter word however, without, we'd all be lifeless."
Posted by Unknown on "Patiently Yours" by Lylani

"Pathological...I find it ironic because I actually looked up that word in the dictionary today. Great poem."
Posted by Nameless Pariah on "pathological lover" by Lylani

"so many ways to be had... well told tale of another disappointing encounter... thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "pathological lover" by Lylani

"I really enjoyed this. It flows sweetly and brings back memories which sting yet taste sweet. Very well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "pathological lover" by Lylani

"Ouch! This makes me want to be hurt again. *shivers* well done. ^v^"
Posted by veingo on "pathological lover" by Lylani

"The last stanza was amazing! Excellent visions dancing in my head...a dropped head as the sun kisses the sky good night.....sleep my child. Beautiful write...thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Silently defiant" by Lylani

"Indeed...you should swin harder :) stay blessed and thankyou for this write :}"
Posted by Unknown on "Silently defiant" by Lylani

"Thank you for this.. i just happened to need it now. ^v^ "
Posted by veingo on "Silently defiant" by Lylani

"Good honest work here..A soul laid bare and the metaphor was very well worked. Nice one :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "I'm Broken" by Lylani

"Still really like this one :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Anticipation" by Lylani

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