Comments by All Members
- "ahhh...I have known these words, felt these words, but never could have expressed them as eloquently as you have. Well done... ~Lavenia"
Posted by Lavenia on "That was us" by Lylani
- ""I knew you'd never see my fourth dimension"..That was the boomshanka before the closer. Fantastic, fantastical and honest all in one :) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "That was us" by Lylani
- "(I screamed in a thousand different voices Only audible to the divine) Wow, what beautiful haunting lines...It reads to me as though she is some form of immortal trapped in skin and bones herself. Love/the giving of herself being her only weakness/ her achilles heel...The interpritation of poetry such an individual personal thing. Thankyou, I loved it :-) "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "That was us" by Lylani
- "No I don't think I'm remotely pure, but sometimes I wake up an optimist and a romantic. But more often I crave experience and give no thought to morals."
Posted by Lylani on "Water Cycle" by Lylani
- "Aww...That was special. Great write. Makes me wander though has the water been polluted or are you as pure as you sound."
Posted by lajeeves on "Water Cycle" by Lylani
- "fantastic imagry!!! this had a great start and ending. i like this a lot."
Posted by Nixx on "Water Cycle" by Lylani
- "Despite a few technical difficulties hence the time delay, as requested I've put my photo (with my son John) back up on my profile "
Posted by Lylani on "Reaching For Daydreams" by Lylani
- "My mother said nothing but good things about the man who is my father all the while I was growing up. After I met him..."HE" blamed my mother for the way I felt about him and our "lack of relationship". Nothing I can say has ever changed that...but I realize it is all on his shoulders...not hers. Nice poem...real topic...intuitive ending. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "A little warning from mummy to father" by Lylani
- "(Holding on to an ice sculpture of hope) What an exceptional piece of imagery. This piece flows really well and has such a strong message. The endind, the ending...I would love for you to put up your photo again, you see so much more of the real you, a poem captured in picture ... Thankyou "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Reaching For Daydreams" by Lylani
- "I just got goose bumps reading that. Sort of feeling a little depressed now, but was a great write in it's ability to convey emotion. ~ Ash"
Posted by Ashteroth on "Reaching For Daydreams" by Lylani
- "What an exceptional piece. Talk about strength.It is so sad in its beauty. I love the way you use nature and its colours to paint the most beautiful of images...Truly impressed"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "I Stood by You" by Lylani
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