Comments by All Members
- "looooove this. i was imagining this in my head the whole time i was reading. very hot. ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Letting Go" by Scarrzz
- "I hope your can write a poem about how to fight back against the demon that taunts you. it's always good to fight back that way you don't become a victim."
Posted by timekop on "Inner Darkness" by Scarrzz
- "as always, u bring out the raw emotion.
thank you for sharing hon must've been difficult to do so."
Posted by natalie on "Empty" by Scarrzz
- "wow! perfect in every way.
what a beautiful tale as only you can tell. sexy as hell!
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Posted by natalie on "Letting Go" by Scarrzz
- "it is really so wonderful to see a man feel as much as this and express it so openly. cudos to you.
can't wait for more of your work to come out.
thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "My Truth" by Scarrzz
- "oh the horror of laying your heart open, exposed; only to have it crushed and left lifeless,yet bleeding in a living hell.
very touching(i cried)..brought back some painful memories.
excellent write scarrz."
Posted by natalie on "Journey to Nowhere" by Scarrzz
- "I like the contradiction inherent here. Is it possible to be clean outside but not inside? Religious connotations aside, I think this speaks of interesting duality, in the Jungian sense. Is the clean exterior a refelection of an outsider's view of "I"? Is it a personal projection of that which we'd like the "I" to be? Wonderful reading things that bring up so many questions. "
Posted by Crush_With_Eyeliner on "Unwashed" by Scarrzz
- "Thank you, Natalie. It came from a very deep place. That one moment changed the path of my life."
Posted by Scarrzz on "The Moment" by Scarrzz
- "wow scarz, that was really deep and as usual, well done. thanks 4 sharing"
Posted by natalie on "The Moment" by Scarrzz
- "A Poem Takes The Life Of The Poet On This One, Entirely Deep With Metaphoric Bliss And A Great Juxtaposition Between The Pure And Corrupt. Very Nice My Friend."
Posted by Chaos God on "Unwashed" by Scarrzz
- "Thank You, Ainsof. You know me well, and are acutely perceptive. I didn't even recognize the sense of quiet nobility conveyed between the lines, but I felt it as I wrote. I love it when a feeling comes out of the whole rather than a specific wording. I don't claim much nobility, but I believe that being willing to risk all by giving a full measure of love is about as deserving of respect as anyone really can get. - As far as the meter goes, Matt read it that way too, but I had intended Iambic with the employment of some anacrusis at the beginning of a few lines. Those could as well be read trochaically, but that wasn't my intent. I wasn't really worrying about constraining the reading of the piece that much, just wanted the flow to be smooth while demonstrating familiarity with meter, since it was for my assignment. Thanks for the thoughtful comment, my friend."
Posted by Scarrzz on "The Path Away" by Scarrzz
- "should I be analyzing the structure here? I love the sentiment, I mean there is a certain nobility of sorts... forlorn, shunned and dismissed, but yet as if there were a head held high somewhere despite the feeling of rejection... How consistently were you seeking to make the meter? I like the final half-line rhyme that sends the reader off with the persona in the poem..... the mixture of natural with supernatural components.. the soul in autumn... brings about a unity, perhaps, of metaphysics and physics... natural supernaturalism.... sarter resartus... Carlyle, is it? Meter is hard to judge, since it is a matter of reading, often, and sometimes close is good enough... but I thought I found a number of trochees and iambs starting lines... and I wasn't entirely convinced of uniformity in feet.... but, ya know.... it's a really sound poem.... and the sentiment as well as imagery is very consistent.... tells a tale, if you will... nice work, man and congrats! scholar!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Path Away" by Scarrzz
- ""With head bowed low and weary gait a solitary figure takes" haunting. Numerous great lines in this piece. Beautifully done. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "The Path Away" by Scarrzz
- "i feel this more than i'd like to admit... it was so real for me that i could almost smell a hint of his cologne in the senses of my memory"
Posted by natalie on "The Scream" by Scarrzz
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