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"Hmmmm....I concur. I have been in denial for a long time (need to write)...yet I read something like this and can completely understand/appreciate every word. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "when there is nothing left to be said" by saturatedloneliness6

"Nice write and so true that writing is an addiction...i'm first to admit that!"
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "when there is nothing left to be said" by saturatedloneliness6

"writing is just as amazing to me as it is to you. you can't ever run out of things to say. and that's what is so amazing about it. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "when there is nothing left to be said" by saturatedloneliness6

""Traded true love for insult and injury.""
Posted by Aleas on "The Ramblings of A Broken Child." by saturatedloneliness6

"There's something intangible about this piece that I just find really compelling and somehow empowering, with that final word, but I can't seem to explain why/how. My failing, not yours, there. And this line - "Bend your legs behind the wire; exhale." - is fantastic."
Posted by purr_verse on "Orchids." by saturatedloneliness6

"(Aleas)*laughs* I'm a poultry man...simply reflecting on something that pulls apart very easily once heat is applied, hence..bbq'ed chook, am I a freak ...yes, would I have it any other way...no. you hit my favorites with that last post brother, cheers."
Posted by Unknown on "Distractions: Writer's Block At It's Worst!" by saturatedloneliness6

"I don't think After_Hours could have said it any better. And that's two poems in a row he's beat me to comment while saying exactly what I was thinking (except the "cooked fucking chook" part...i can't say those three words in succession crossed my mind). Anyways! The thrill/want/desire to write the next amazing line often trumps the message we are trying to send and stunts the thought process, until we are no longer writing/thinking about the feeling, but fretting over just how much we want to impress and show our writing prowess. The meaning gets lost in the shuffle. Suffice to say, most things don't need colorful prose to pack a punch. You write for you. "
Posted by Aleas on "Distractions: Writer's Block At It's Worst!" by saturatedloneliness6

"I'm not going to tell you to take a walk, or take a deep breath...just go over all the little incidences that have happened to you over the years and pick it apart like a cooked fucking chook, you'll find shit loads of bones."
Posted by Unknown on "Distractions: Writer's Block At It's Worst!" by saturatedloneliness6

"Point taken....it's always easy looking from the outside in :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Junk Mail Heart (revised.)" by saturatedloneliness6

"Break up's are a drive for any kind of writer"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Junk Mail Heart (revised.)" by saturatedloneliness6

"joanna just hit comment six six six :O -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Junk Mail Heart (revised.)" by saturatedloneliness6

"i'm gonna tell him i'm gonna tell him :D and read he shall -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Junk Mail Heart (revised.)" by saturatedloneliness6

"you're right. i need to change it to something more appropriate. i wrote this one when i was broken up with my boyfriend. he has never read it, and i dont plan on letting him. :]"
Posted by saturatedloneliness6 on "Junk Mail Heart (revised.)" by saturatedloneliness6

"I really like this, but the title doesn't do it justice.. "
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "Junk Mail Heart (revised.)" by saturatedloneliness6

"this is harsh, painful yet it doesnt feel like a tragedy -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Junk Mail Heart (revised.)" by saturatedloneliness6

"wow great really like your work very smooth -monroe* "
Posted by insanemonroe on "disappointment." by saturatedloneliness6

"I think love is your strength, not your "weakness"-I basically went underground for 2 and half years, and I don't have any magic answers, but it certainly wasn't hate that brought me back to the surface... your current, is my past. Enjoyed the write. "
Posted by Unknown on "disappointment." by saturatedloneliness6

"This is a great line, "should i be disappointed because we didn't do anything or should i be happy because i did nothing with you?" Really cool.."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "disappointment." by saturatedloneliness6

"I've read this one over several times, and I love the escapes that just seem to bring you back to the ending... and that emotional mutilation. Honest and devastating write."
Posted by Sketso on "burned out." by saturatedloneliness6

"*sighs* where to begin with this, lets not, this piece brought back thoughts and memories that are better left beneath the bed, good write miss -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "eating mud pies made of real mud." by saturatedloneliness6

"a fall and violent crash, shake it off, get back up, nicely put in words -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Orchids." by saturatedloneliness6

"nice, i liked the ambiance of this piece, truthful, painful yet an ending i didn't expect, 'the kind without a razorblade', nice twist to this, well done -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "burned out." by saturatedloneliness6

"wow. this is my favorite piece from you so far. i really liked it... i love how you don't have your blinders on, (especially to yourself) very nice piece. i like"
Posted by RubyXero on "burned out." by saturatedloneliness6

"nicely done. welcome to dp!! ~ hdb."
Posted by Unknown on "burned out." by saturatedloneliness6

"I had to read it over a couple of times, as my cat was trying to bogart my food... anyway- I loved it. nothing better than crazy honesty in a read. welcome"
Posted by freudian-slip on "burned out." by saturatedloneliness6

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