Comments by All Members
- "The last line stings, wonderfully written. Beautifully orchestrated feelings of love in the beginning then a nice dark yet still beautiful twist. Well written *salutes*"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on ""I Promise..."" by Organized_Chaos
- "....the end is very amaazing,,the effect is very detailed, your in a room of mirrors, and ...wow, really good, powerful, and you can imagine it, ,,,,i still talk to myself to,,great write"
Posted by GraveFlower on "Short Rant of Insanity #2" by Organized_Chaos
- "good rant. i tend to rant in rant too. you got your message out pretty well in such a small rant. it usually takes me a few lines before i completely get everything off my chest. lol. keep ranting!"
Posted by Syringe on "Short Rant of Insanity" by Organized_Chaos
- "I don't know if it was meant to or not... but the last line definitly made me chuckle. Maybe because I sometimes get in this zone where everything i write comes out sing songy like a nursery rhyme and its baffling to me. Ill be taking about corpses and dismemberment and still sound like dr. seuss. Or maybe it wasn't supposed to be funny and i'm just a complete jerk for finding it so. Either way i'm having a shitty week and was happy to smile :P"
Posted by TheUltimateOutlaw on "Short Rant of Insanity" by Organized_Chaos
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