Short Rant of Insanity #2

By Organized_Chaos

Shut your mouth,
Before I punch you in your fucking face,
If you touch me one more time,
I am going to put you in your place.

I must get out of this dark room,
It is bad for my health,
Surrounded by mirrors all alone,
I just realized I was talking to myself.

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© 2008 Blood_Wing
Published on Wednesday, March 5, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: positively amazing!!!!!

  • GraveFlower On Wednesday, March 5, 2008, GraveFlower (240)By person wrote:

    ....the end is very amaazing,,the effect is very detailed, your in a room of mirrors, and ...wow, really good, powerful, and you can imagine it, ,,,,i still talk to myself to,,great write

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