"I Promise..."

By Organized_Chaos

She looks into his eyes,
Into his soul,
Into the past she begins to wonder,
Thinking of all the good times they had,
And the bad times the ponders.

She laid down next to his cold, motionless body,
As despair gnaws ever so deeply on her soul,
Behind all the deseption and lies,
There is a hidden love.

She holds his hand,
And kisses his head,
As a tear slides down her cheek and onto the pillow,
She thinks as death as the equivelent of life,
As her mind wonders beyond a flowery meadow.

She laid her head on his chest,
As she reached over for a razor blade,
She placed the razor on her wrist,
As she said a short and sweet prayer.

Finaly, as the blood begins to spill, her dream comes true.

They were together untill death.

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© 2008 Blood_Wing
Published on Tuesday, March 18, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Musik2MyEyes On Monday, April 5, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    What a tragic love story. Those are wonderful...like the way you detailed this one.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    The last line stings, wonderfully written. Beautifully orchestrated feelings of love in the beginning then a nice dark yet still beautiful twist. Well written *salutes*

  • denver nitze On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    tragic, but beautiful. ~ta~

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