Short Rant of Insanity

By Organized_Chaos

This Demon inside of me,
Is losing control,
I wish it would let me be,
Before I lose my soul.

It's becoming very hard to find
As it kills me slowly through time,
It's taking control of my mind,
And making me write this fucked up ryme.

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© 2008 Blood_Wing
Published on Tuesday, March 4, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • GraveFlower On Wednesday, March 5, 2008, GraveFlower (240)By person wrote:

    mm, i believe you will be a mastermind someday, ...very good,

  • Syringe On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, Syringe (51)By person wrote:

    good rant. i tend to rant in rant too. you got your message out pretty well in such a small rant. it usually takes me a few lines before i completely get everything off my chest. lol. keep ranting!

  • TheUltimateOutlaw On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw (43)By person wrote:

    I don't know if it was meant to or not... but the last line definitly made me chuckle. Maybe because I sometimes get in this zone where everything i write comes out sing songy like a nursery rhyme and its baffling to me. Ill be taking about corpses and dismemberment and still sound like dr. seuss. Or maybe it wasn't supposed to be funny and i'm just a complete jerk for finding it so. Either way i'm having a shitty week and was happy to smile :P

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