Comments by All Members
- "this was....absolutely incredible, a hybrid of tone and colours and emotions; darkly but almost softly conveyed, your use of imagination in this and the directness, the taste. I can taste...so many things. Absolute eye-candy to brain candy to sumptuous treat. Hell yes!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Flower Girl" by Narcissa
- "like a story from one who has seen it all, with fond memories and sadness all together... and the most intimate touch hidden within it all. Mose beautifully written..."
Posted by Sketso on "Flower Girl" by Narcissa
- "As flesh merged our palms wed i just love this line... the whole poem was exceptional"
Posted by Unknown on "Flower Girl" by Narcissa
- "strangely sad in a beautiful way kelloggs. lol, that didnt make much sense since that was obvious. what i meant to really say was through the sadness there is beauty and color beyond recognition. new colors that would make someone feel blind for they have no name. what has no name most deny. dont deny that beauty kells *huggles, sticks a daisy in your hair* ^_^"
Posted by Unknown on "Flower Girl" by Narcissa
- "...a submersive write, immense with nuance and wonder and falling emotions. .. . 'our palms wed'.. .. its in the small intricacies of every.thing that we feel the most, alive, or dead. .. beautifully rendered. .. nessa"
Posted by Unknown on "Flower Girl" by Narcissa
- "Really enjoyed the way it all pieced together and the unraveling notions as if the thoughts were part of a conversation that were taking place in 'real time'...hence - "Yeah".....~tandem sync~"
Posted by Unknown on "Razor Blade Skies with Aleas" by Narcissa
- "An ancient portrayal of conditioned hearts ducking and weaving through thick and thin in order to bring a result, of which only will surfice if the heart is content with its efforts...Excellence. "
Posted by Unknown on "You should know..." by Narcissa
- "I used to work on one of Tulsa's major streets, right where the highway crossed over, and I watched this story every day. Beer is an easier get than miracles."
Posted by Sketso on "Gutter Lily" by Narcissa
- "It's nice to see the invisible people get
a mention, unfortunately for the reasons just why they go un-noticed, well depicted."
Posted by Unknown on "Gutter Lily" by Narcissa
- "What a site, one i have seen before not too long ago, all i could do is watch as the life crossed a path of another empty face, excellent write -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Gutter Lily" by Narcissa
- "this gave me chills. not because i'm frightened of 'lady rage', but because i think i might be her. very nice write. *cheers* ~tÅ~"
Posted by denver nitze on "Lady Rage" by Narcissa
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