Comments by All Members
- "congrats man .. you strung together all the words necessary to achieve such a beautiful statement. i thrive on these split moment celebrations. you nailed this , and nailed it well ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "drumsex/venice beach" by zanewill
- "i love u'r lines like "slipping away like sands on the shore" and "when the mt's crumble from the sky". i like how it began light but ended much heavier than i expected"
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "vanished" by zanewill
- "Sound like our government..
nicely written
the flow it has is delightful
impressing"
Posted by Unknown on "Brutal" by zanewill
- "Usually I dont even bother with works that are soooo intricate with words.. but this was very good and very capturing.. I'm impressed. "
Posted by Disassembly Boy on "Brutal" by zanewill
- "glad u left a comment for my journal piece, cuz i like u'r work alot. cool rhyme scheme and relatable content. i'll hav 2 read more of your stuff. "
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "caught raw" by zanewill
- "I read this through and I realized it is best read aloud. When I did that, the tempo just kept increasing....angry, accusing, mocking. Very well done."
Posted by frileyma on "Brutal" by zanewill
- "I don't know what to say. There was so much emotion in this that I don't know where to start. Well done to say the least."
Posted by Unknown on "vanished" by zanewill
- "You've struck deeply measured chords within me here.. I've no words, only that constant reminder.. Thank you truly. ~b"
Posted by blue on "death alone" by zanewill
- ""i'd rather be dipped
in dog shit &
rolled in corn flakes
baked & sold
as soy beefcakes" haha that made me laugh. i liked this a lot."
Posted by dying angel on "chintzy" by zanewill
- "yupyup! An impervious circle of unrest the poison government machine is. All of them. ~b"
Posted by blue on "chintzy" by zanewill
- "the stag is the greenman consecrated
with the goddess in ritual. probabley very
celtic since that's the Druid origin. it's kind of archytipical/symbolic imagery,,consecration & affirmation of nature?!>>>>>>>>"
Posted by zanewill on "Anabel-lee in the tree" by zanewill
- "Makes me want to get a robe on and get it on under a tree and think maybe the daed can celebrate with me. I recognise some of the mythology and am trying to drag up the stag...Gaelic myth?"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Anabel-lee in the tree" by zanewill
- "This is definitely interesting. I like the way you changed the name, in order to create a rhyming flow...nicely done! ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Anabel-lee in the tree" by zanewill
- "*laughs* wow...I like how you use words explicitly and without any preamble - no pretty picture before the nitty gritty - just what is and no more, because no more is needed. Direct and to the point a skill that is not often utilized well"
Posted by Solace on "verbiage" by zanewill
- "I like the use of the rhythm; the swift enjambent of lines makes it sardonic; jam packed and highly readable; and the language you use is brusque and exciting, a great slap-a-bout poem; sinuous and scathing"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "chintzy" by zanewill
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