Comments by All Members
- "Very beautiful. The flow was great and the imagery used throughout was as well. This had me swaying with the seasons. The last two stanzas were my favorites. Nice job."
Posted by Dilated View on "Fantastical Fae" by Berry Fantastic
- "Will o wisps that leave me gasping, brilliant! Sometimes you have to find the right people to read your pieces. Find the ones who write like you and reply on their poetry.write on."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Fantastical Fae" by Berry Fantastic
- "GREAT! I love the Dr. Seuss feel to it. It was the imaginary free for all world that is full of dancing and and fun! I want to flutter there too!! =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Wondering Wanderment" by Berry Fantastic
- "I like the way the measure of each line softens the strike of the end rhyme... and the content itself is mystical, longing perhaps, very gentle in sentiment... an enjoyable lil write, thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "The Moon" by Berry Fantastic
- "The mirror...I'd say honest reflection is what I love but, honesty in general suffices. Although sometimes it is nicer to wear a mask just to get people to f*ck off. Excellent work *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Hope?" by Berry Fantastic
- "I thinks it maybe that moms is to afraid to expand her horizons. Our accept people for who they are. Maybe she is a coward. I've known mothers like that. But on the side of mother's, they do have the ability to love you no matter what so, I think that this is a very good piece, I think you need to keep up the good work. Shit will come round. Keep on your keepin' on. "
Posted by Circe Avalon on "To Those Who Are Cowardly" by Berry Fantastic
- "I'm pretty sure your mother loves, at least you have you...and it's pretty pathetic you call her "the coward", if you would set her down and tell her how you feel I'm pretty sure she would understand......quit feeling pity for yourself..."
Posted by Unknown on "To Those Who Are Cowardly" by Berry Fantastic
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