Comments by All Members
- "This read like being on trial for being human. Hints at a struggle that is not yet finished, and future fights to come. Maybe a prisoner swap between rivals? I liked that it was vague this way. Interesting read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Strong fighter" by SilentDreamer
- "The first part reminded me a lot of Atlas. The rest evoked a familiar feeling. Interesting ending. Overall, rather nice, I must say."
Posted by wilted on "Choas to Peace" by SilentDreamer
- "yes, your right, i have, am living like this, i know exactly what you are talkin about, painting a smile on....yes, awesome write to, so expressing, and reveals all of your inner pain and depression, so deep, i love it ~*danni*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "Behind the living mask." by SilentDreamer
- "you had an excellent flow to it. It went smooth. It was a nice timeline also. I think you did an excellent job on it. One thing you did change it up jumping from the first to the second stanza. Is that going to be a problem for your teacher. ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer
- "Fearing what might [have] happened, Holding me next to him as he [wandered] on with his life.. Grammer Mistakes. As for the Sonnet. It seemed well forced. Life you were forced to write it instead of inspired ][ ][
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Posted by Unknown on "Walking in fear of love" by SilentDreamer
- ""Dieing away only to leave a chill to stay " 11 syllables..... away is 2
.... k im done for the night call me if u need more helpp.... use dictionary.com... it shows u how many syllables in a word... gl"
Posted by EnlightenedFailure on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer
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