Comments by All Members
- "To me this described that moment when you glimpse a girl who sends you into wild rapture. Absolutely wonderful poem with a fantastic flow. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper
- "beauty of the heightened sense......an unspoken language of intensity.... spellbinding."
Posted by elisa on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper
- "egads! that ending is shiveringly seductive.. ..and that ~~~~~charged midsection. . .. what a visual effect/treat! original and orgas....yeah, you get the idea. .."
Posted by Unknown on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper
- "it's times like these that i am so glad i'm a pervert. i don't know if this was meant to be lovingly sexual but it's divine. "
Posted by sIo on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper
- "Take me away please...this is just breath-taking, a surge of beauty with each and every line. Romance with nature is so enduring. Love it. Fav."
Posted by Mylissa on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper
- "oh my...sweetness drips like ink from the well of your mind. This is beautiful...sensuality at its finest!"
Posted by Unknown on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper
- "I love love loveee the visual. This is so easy to imagine, almost like a dream that I seem to be floating through while reading this. Beautiful and wonderful."
Posted by K_Love on "Sunday (wishing)" by jack paper
- "A classic, brilliant statement of love. A write for the ones who set a spark in the soul. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Muse" by jack paper
- "I read this slowly..letting each line ripen with meaning.I had to wipe the tears from my eyes to finish."
Posted by Unknown on "Shroud" by jack paper
- "this was awesome .... you should have a posse cuz youre a giant ...you guided this beautifully ...but please note.. the guys plowing your street were on doubletime and there was nothing sad "
Posted by capt_funguy on "Sunday (wishing)" by jack paper
- "your words penetrate my very core with such intense images.You, my friend, are a paragon of poetic perfection!"
Posted by Unknown on "Sunday (wishing)" by jack paper
- "sapid....a tasty dish. Very vivid and thick with great imagery....I'm not sure post-drunken state I got the ins and outs but the feel of the poem was very chaotic with its great word selections and ultimate narrative fallout......wicked!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Sunday (wishing)" by jack paper
- "It is a different foot to be on instead of begging to be able to let someone else in, you are trying to get in, so neat perspective too. One word of beauty is unjust to this art. ~T "
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Sunday (wishing)" by jack paper
- "I turn to a hobo for five minutes more of sleep too. I loved that liquor store stanza. Even with all the imagery the lonilness still managed to get through. "
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Sunday (wishing)" by jack paper
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