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"Love it. This is a shorty to savour. Great work."
Posted by carlosjackal on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"taunts him with silk...:oP"
Posted by Mylissa on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"mmm...an evocative little piece ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"dark....."
Posted by Unknown on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"mesmerized...silk is lovely! ;}"
Posted by Mylissa on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"o0o....short and sweet "
Posted by Reefer_rave on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"I like it ^ ^"
Posted by Unknown on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"intriguing thought.... nicely done."
Posted by elisa on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"interesting enough! nice."
Posted by What Limes on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"very true... spiders see only the goal of self preservation.... nice one"
Posted by NikesRain on "New Symmetry" by jack paper

"the brain candy in this is lovely, the emotions and visuals it stirred...haunting at the same time...that one could do so much and have so much power in just being an object of affection....great work"
Posted by NikesRain on "Circles" by jack paper

"sexy write, really =)"
Posted by mysterylove on "Breathe II" by jack paper

"Poems with a good rhyme and rhythm are by far the most fun to read and thats why I like this one"
Posted by Unknown on "Run" by jack paper

"hahahah!"
Posted by Unknown on "Alike (when I bit you)" by jack paper

"hmm great follow up. very predatorial.. this was done brilliantly."
Posted by Tania on "Breathe II" by jack paper

"excellent write. you have captured the essence of an unobtainable desire perfectly. "
Posted by Unknown on "Breathe II" by jack paper

"raw contemplation...fierce and focused. ..i love it."
Posted by elisa on "Breathe II" by jack paper

"My favorite part is 'I will possess' sexually charged. Lovely."
Posted by Mylissa on "Breathe II" by jack paper

"this was like an inhale of the steam that rises off hot sake... dusky sweet with a lingering catch that just teases the senses with want.... breath catching for sure..."
Posted by NikesRain on "Breathe II" by jack paper

"shadowplay; a wavering breathy image to cling to in this ......needful piece. ness."
Posted by Unknown on "Breathe II" by jack paper

"The ending is polished with perfection. So beautiful each word, feeling, emotion. Twisting and turning inside me. Outstanding. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Breathe II" by jack paper

"this was enchanting, intense with such decadent softness tinting all of it...luciousness"
Posted by NikesRain on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper

"the visuals and weight of emotions blend for a flowing read... it's melancholy yet the hints of light are drawing and sigh pulling...nicely done"
Posted by NikesRain on "Sunday (wishing)" by jack paper

"Ha! this was very funny. And too true. Man I wish pick up lines worked.."
Posted by Unknown on "cosmic ditty (how i get the girls)" by jack paper

"I love moments like this :) too bad they always end with people driving on into the same life as before.. "
Posted by Unknown on "life in cars" by jack paper

"watching, still. beautiful! "
Posted by Mylissa on "Breathe" by jack paper

"Wow...she pulled me in also. Had to delve further in to this enchanting goddess. If this be the reflection of a woman incarnate I hope you both fare better."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper

"now this was mesmerizing! and those last few words.. wow."
Posted by Tania on "PSAMATHE" by jack paper

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