Comments by All Members
- "Run Rhyme run!!LOL !!*>> this sic-
little ditty will get u going real
quickly..I am definately SKEERED!
rock on write on don't loose hard on>>
i love asunder & askew..languid
luscious soulless silent"
Posted by zanewill on "Run" by jack paper
- "you already know what i think of this piece...breathtakingly sad, yet so elegantly described it cant help but be beautiful ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Etched (when you left)" by jack paper
- "this was crushing..such sorrow spilled softly..like raindrops sliding down a window ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Falling" by jack paper
- "skeered lol...this made me giggle..it might be the vodka but i couldnt help myself ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Run" by jack paper
- "is there anything more frustrating than a skittish significant other running away from feelings? i think not ~kristy "
Posted by Sin on "connection" by jack paper
- ""i find a pen
and chain them
to the page" oh my...this was fabulous. i seriously feel stupid now for not reading you more often. "
Posted by dying angel on "sleepless" by jack paper
- ""You are a rock
A ragged creation
A Heavenly body
Perfect in purpose
Fired
With brute force accuracy" this was sooo perfect. i really enjoyed this piece."
Posted by dying angel on "Circles" by jack paper
- "i couldnt agree more with carl...the best way to rid ourselves of mental poison is to release it through our pen...great write~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "sleepless" by jack paper
- "hah, now i have the room to fave this. it's even better the second time around :)."
Posted by Unknown on "sleepless" by jack paper
- "fucking awsome ending! made me think of pink floyds the wall, and snake like vampires. i know that is not what you probably meant for, but the images i got were wonderfull!"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Alike (when I bit you)" by jack paper
- "this was wonderful...and those last two lines left me with a smile ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Muse" by jack paper
- "mm the beauty of snakes..slithering with serpentile grace..tongue flickering, tasting..maybe i read too much into this or perhaps my mind is just in the gutter again but i found this erotic and spicy...great write ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Alike (when I bit you)" by jack paper
- "oh the tension and anticipation rolled off this in waves...i could see the predatory stares, the slow slide of a tongue when you can almost taste it...mm this was hot ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Breathe" by jack paper
- "your wording, the images, ahhhh this was sigh worthy..simply beautiful *tips hat* ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Circles" by jack paper
- "i liked this a lot. very beautiful. i can sense your own self in this, you revealed yourself in this. great write. ~Tamara"
Posted by Unknown on "Circles" by jack paper
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