Comments by All Members
- "That second part gave me anxiety. A very stark and cold read. But a good one. Write on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "My End" by LOKI
- "a heart's lament that is so relatable. thanks for sharing! hang in there and stay safe!"
Posted by natalie on "Lost Song" by LOKI
- "Almost a cerebral C&W song my friend; same for me with my first love too. Le sigh, sadly, but cheers for tomorrow! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Lost Song" by LOKI
- "I enjoyed this so much, the rhyme made it flow beautifully in my head as I read it, and the amount of passion that you communicated in even just these three verses was remarkable. Thank you for sharing this. ~AbbyMetallica"
Posted by AbbyMetallica on "Lost Song" by LOKI
- "What an absolutely devastating topic, and how tragic those last two lines. This is the type of write that hits a reader hard and sticks in their gut. Sadly written but nicely done."
Posted by Dilated View on "Only Heaven Can Wait" by LOKI
- "There have been more lives lost in my he name of religion, than any war on this earth. For it is the society if man that roams this place devouring everything in his path.. Uttered words of peace have never brought peace to anyone, but it has always been those few warriors that knew in their hearts of mans deceit, have been the peacemakers....13"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "The Art of War" by LOKI
- "This is an outlook that I think many, myself included, could adopt and use as their mantra. Tomorrow could bring anything, afterall, but no matter what one experienced the days or weeks prior there's always that promise of waking up with a fresh perspective and shrugging the struggles off and to stay focused on what and who are truly important. Very uplifting read, thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Tomorrow " by LOKI
- "All I can say is, I love this....I one had a son, I told this very same things to....this write comes from a beautiful heart. And spirit !!! ........13..."
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Tomorrow " by LOKI
- "Darkness has an evil connotation from movies and books but, you're right, there is peace, comfort and tranquility as well. Btw, Loki, is that from " Vikings"?"
Posted by Damien on "The Darkness" by LOKI
- "Finding comfort in the darkness is something I can relate to. Great piece!"
Posted by IamZero on "The Darkness" by LOKI
- "If I don't display my anger I gnaw on it. If I do display my anger I feel guilty and gnaw on that too. Can't win. Great write. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "A Dark Compassion" by LOKI
- "Good for you not to let your environment etch away at who you are or to let anyone give you shit for that "
Posted by Unknown on "Pawns,Kings,and Me" by LOKI
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