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- "Definitely was thinking about doing a duet. I'm trying to figure out a verse to tie the two together and get a finished product out of them. Not sure yet how to end it. But eventually I'll post them as a finished product.
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Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Forgiven" by Ocean of Truth
- "ah, yeah, I can see it... the second one is when forgiveness fails, right?... like, ok.... fuck it, forget me then... nice. They work well together, haha, I got this picture of a possible duet, ya know... male voice with forgive... female with forget... lol... call it a divorce anthem haha... nice work, though... thanks for pointing out the connection."
Posted by Unknown on "Forgiven" by Ocean of Truth
- "resuscitation.... how love ebbs and flows.... very touching with uniquely arranged imagery.. a rebirth of commitment in the eyes and soul of the beloved... well wrought work, and a voyage that inspires; thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "The one Thing..." by Ocean of Truth
- "Thanks It's paired with another write that I might eventually make into a song with the both of them, just like an all or nothing kind of thing. I'm glad I portrayed it well enough for people to notice it. I think a good song name would be like "Forgive or Forget""
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Forgotten" by Ocean of Truth
- "haha, damn man, this is a damn brutal way to tell someone to leave.... talk about meaning less than nothing.... just forget you ever even laid eyes on me.... please. nice write, thanks for the seething ire."
Posted by Unknown on "Forgotten" by Ocean of Truth
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