My Angel In Black
By Ocean of Truth
Youre so evil, youre so mean, tainted, and unclean
Stay away from her shes the devil
How can they say that, they don't know you,
Well i got close, underneath your guard, and you took my breath away
I saw my angel of fire, my greatest desire
underneath it all shines a bright light but you keep it hidden,
you protect it from others not wanting pain,
I constantly wait for you to show me
But I can't seem to get past all safeguards
The pain comes deep from your heart
You keep it deep down clearly apart
Please help me understand my angel
How long have I waited
Now that you are sedated
May I finally understand enough to truly love you
How many times have I asked
All you can do is bask in the pain of my heart
I am open to you in full
Just simply waiting for you to let me see the true angel
The angel behind the fire
I cry to you to let me see! Let me feel!
I finally see the origin of the fire
Nothing but cheap pyrotechnics to keep everyone away
I walk through the fire into the blinding light
And wrap my arms around you promising to keep you safe
Trust me I say, trust my actions, my motives, and my abilities
I'll never let you go my angel of darkness...
Comments on "My Angel In Black"
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A former member wrote:
i love the darkness in your poem ;)
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A former member wrote:
this was very good I really liked it
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On Sunday, October 1, 2006, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Wow man. Nice rhyme scheme. You should do this more.
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On Monday, September 25, 2006, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
you are beautiful...
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Ocean of Truth
(43) wrote:
ah but you are even so much more so
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On Thursday, December 7, 2006, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
I still love this...