Me and Jack Daniels

By Ocean of Truth

JD is like a father to me

Oh mister jack,
wont you come back,
Wont you come back,
And give me the fifth that I lack

Jd is like a father to me,
He got me through puberty,
Not to mention my first lay,
He made it the best day,
How many times have we hung out
To me you are so very devout

It’s just me and you
Can’t everyone else get the clue?
I don’t need anyone else
They’re all too complicated
You are just unsophisticated
Now I’ve chased everyone off
And it’s just me and you

Up the stairs I go
Or is it go the stairs I up…
One step up two steps stumbled
Oh I am so perfectly humbled
I use the bottle like a cane
Oh how you numb the pain
And it’s just me and you

I fall down the stairs and wait patiently at the bottom
The room spins in circles like a crashing plane
Who will come to help me up?
Oh mister jack you’ve fucked me up
So I lay here for lack of better things to do
Vomiting incessantly I begin to choke
No one here to help me up
I faint from the nausea
Never to return
Just me and JD….

To my friends… without you, I am dead, with you, I live, in more ways then one


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© 2006 Ocean of Truth
Published on Sunday, September 24, 2006.     Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Saturday, June 4, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    I've started this comment 6 times and erased it cause I can't seem to release this demon with envy lust excitement and desire in the perfect way... aint that a bitch... Damn it Gin, you've done it again! I love this write, thankx JD Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I agree. There are no words. Twas amazing. Scholar

  • Malice In Wonderland On Tuesday, April 8, 2008, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    mmm, jack... Scholar

  • Alanarchy On Friday, November 3, 2006, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    To your health, good sir! Seems to me you best renew your account, son. Good stuff.

  • Thorn On Friday, November 3, 2006, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    Ah, odes to Uncle Jack...

  • BleedSilver On Sunday, October 1, 2006, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    Niiiiiice dude. I really loved the part wwith the bottle as your cane...

  • Malice In Wonderland On Monday, September 25, 2006, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    hah, perfect. Ah the memories... Scholar

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