Comments by All Members
- "I've started this comment 6 times and erased it cause I can't seem to release this demon with envy lust excitement and desire in the perfect way... aint that a bitch... Damn it Gin, you've done it again! I love this write, thankx JD"
Posted by Devilish on "Me and Jack Daniels" by Ocean of Truth
- "Yes Yes Yes!!! You were flawless in your form... I want to engrave that statement a number of places! Thank you for sharing this one... Awsome!"
Posted by Devilish on "Paranoia" by Ocean of Truth
- "it's a shame the scum will not get to read this hehe.... well composed loathing and disdain.... luckily there is nothing shared between :) cheers!"
Posted by Unknown on "Scumof TheWorld" by Ocean of Truth
- "I have a couple of people that tainted my view of humanity..the problem being that without them I wouldnt exist..but then existence without life is torture enough..a very polite way of dealing with the scum, concise and controlled..**Bows**"
Posted by Amphigorist on "Scumof TheWorld" by Ocean of Truth
- "This was an extremely tame version of what I really wanted to say, but thats why I did the structure the way I did, the first write was just like a long letter that had ALOT of cursing, so I decided I should make it a little more generalized, this one particular person removed most of my faith in humanity... "
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Scumof TheWorld" by Ocean of Truth
- "Fuck, I have a list that I could have written this about. That voracious, consuming hatred that eats away at you until you have barely a shred of humanity left in you when it comes to that person and the thought of evisceration is comforting. You didn't hit the nail on the head, you vapourized that mofo."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Scumof TheWorld" by Ocean of Truth
- "yes, I like the cool rage here, the patient fury, like a snake in the bush, awaiting the chance to strike."
Posted by wraith on "Defender" by Ocean of Truth
- "the one lonely heart seeking redemption in her thirst, perhaps? an elixir of past mistakes.... maybe a wine of the infidel grape.... dunno, but I like the development of the conceit.... extends as it does in so many directions of intoxicating detail.... cheers! to love and pain."
Posted by Unknown on "Schizophrenic Actions" by Ocean of Truth
- "haha... you're too kind... yeah, the less personal thing is a standard mantra in school... *shrugs* I guess I've gotten too used to it, maybe :)"
Posted by Unknown on "The Passive Observer" by Ocean of Truth
- "I was really trying to steer wasy from making this personal, because I've been told since Elementary school that I would be a better writer if I could write better impersonally. Always love the feedback ainsof, really value the opinion of a great writer like yourself."
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "The Passive Observer" by Ocean of Truth
- "resonating... full of implication and open for application... so very open, yessirree... I enjoy mapping the ways this means to me.. thank you. I'm thinking maybe "it's" and maybe not so much the "your" unless this is a personal preference considering a particular person in mind? Just some thoughts.... really loved the description and the floating feeling this carries throughout... well done *bows*"
Posted by Unknown on "The Passive Observer" by Ocean of Truth
- "This sounds amazing .. I could see a scenario forming in my head with every word. Had me wanting to shout and "don't stop until you're on top" .. Smooth yet rugged. Epic indeed. "
Posted by Unknown on "13 Minutes to Mayhem" by Ocean of Truth
- "That is interesting, I can kinda hear some nice heavy metal going along with this, maybe groove metal it seems. I write music, mainly metal, so that is just my impression. It sounds good. i want to hear the sng that would go with it now."
Posted by Unknown on "13 Minutes to Mayhem" by Ocean of Truth
- "Chilling and yet darkly beautiful. It's personal enough for everyone to relate too and it makes it a perfect piece.
Bravo :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Forgiven" by Ocean of Truth
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