Comments by All Members
- "You shithead, I miss you so much cousin! Nicely written by the way. I stumbled across you scrolling through members. Glad to see you're back in the thick of it. I love you and miss you my friend."
Posted by Phalanx on "Wisps of Passion" by Ghost One
- "It certainly holds a nice beat and flow, and may that new day be better than the last, always. Well written."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "A Days" by Ghost One
- "this reminds me of me, i have to say. but i reallly, really like it. nice flow, pretty words, wonderful concept :)"
Posted by Moonflower on "A Days" by Ghost One
- "it is a blessing to stumble into your world once more, your words are ever wise and graceful. this piece presents to me a beautiful contrast of the mortal and divine."
Posted by Unknown on "This Is Why by theemptyman" by Ghost One
- "wow this was really powerful, great write i am happy that you've found your one, beware though objects in a mirror are farther then they appear great write
happy chickens~!"
Posted by Anoblechicken on "Connections..." by Ghost One
- "Deep thoughts, simply stated, that could cause anyone to strip down to the foundation and (possibly) reconstruct their own outline."
Posted by Sketso on "Just a thought..." by Ghost One
- "Jesus Christ, Gary. I've missed these glimpses of your soul. I've missed the power and intensity of your whisper. Glorious pen. Please come back to DP, and stay?"
Posted by Unknown on "This Is Why by theemptyman" by Ghost One
- "this is incredible. for some reason i felt the silence. and i like it now. i love the silence "
Posted by Mars on "..." by Ghost One
- ""The lessons of silence are peerless and are unmatched by anything else under heaven" LaoTzu. Yup, I fully agree.. and, I'll go you one further, I am more than perfectly convinced that this simple act, undertaken sincerely by EVERYONE is the only way we will become human again. dig it."
Posted by blue on "..." by Ghost One
- "Kind of really great... makes me think at an artist presenting his new painting: an empty piece of paper. I like this =)"
Posted by Any on "..." by Ghost One
- "yeah i never really care to write in rythm, but i thought i'd try and it sounded great while i was writing it, but like i said after i re-read it the flow and rythm was just all shot to hell. "
Posted by Ghost One on "Inspired by a shooting star." by Ghost One
- "I think you are insane. But insanity is funny! at least from a distance and as long as I'm not the one changing your diaper :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Ha! I am a moron!!" by Ghost One
- "the first 8 lines I felt the most.kinda made me think 'keep your eyes on the prize' or else you'll be taking 2 steps back. The afterword made me laugh...well, the part about shitting out the remains of literary corpses did ;) now that, is poetry!"
Posted by Unknown on "Steps" by Ghost One
- "i do so apreciate comments... good or bad. they help me criticiz myself. lol and do mean alot to me. so please comment away... pretty please? lol ok sorry i'm not gonna beg for comments...
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Posted by Ghost One on "Ode To Amanda" by Ghost One
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