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By Ghost One

So much can be heard from the silence...

If you just listen.

*** The empty spaces are the missing words that are swept away by the roaring winds of my turbulant mind...***

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Published on Wednesday, January 17, 2007. Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Comments on "..."

On Monday, May 5, 2008, blue (1409) wrote:

"The lessons of silence are peerless and are unmatched by anything else under heaven" LaoTzu. Yup, I fully agree.. and, I'll go you one further, I am more than perfectly convinced that this simple act, undertaken sincerely by EVERYONE is the only way we will become human again. dig it.
On Monday, May 5, 2008, Any (39) wrote:

Kind of really great... makes me think at an artist presenting his new painting: an empty piece of paper. I like this =)
A former member wrote: silence is the ultimate form of Chaos. listen and it will corrupt you. ~ red.
A former member wrote: Haha. I think it did work. Caught my attention.
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, lstdarkness (26) wrote:

not a waste of time... just kinda of lacking. It is just one of those things that is a risk... did it work? Maybe you are getting responses which means you envoked thought... what are you trying to accomplish.
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, Ghost One (12) wrote:

yeah i spose it was a cop out... i just had to write something... i've been having trouble getting my feelings and thoughts to paper as of late. and just couldn't stand it anymore. i'm sorry if you felt it was a waste of your time. :(
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

haha...hey Ghost, your not the first to do this...or receive such comments. There are so many poems here, that when you click on one...you have an expectation, these types of posts can make the reader feel tricked...which often begits annoyance.
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

Brush yourself off and try again...even a 4 lined stanza can be deemed a creative sentiment...and may be more valued in content then a 40 lines poem. Eh...just some thoughts.
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, elisa (1595) wrote:

the absences of sound........ makes me feel like a masterpiece.
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

This is like painting a small dot on a canvas and calling it art.
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, glasshouse (530) wrote:

its worse because i had to scroll down to even know it wasn't worth looking at.
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, glasshouse (530) wrote:

cop out.
On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, carlosjackal (2789) wrote:

Genius.