Ode To Amanda

By Ghost One

A shy attempt at descrining the feelings thtat you inspire in me...


Oh my dearest...
My sweet, passionate, gorgeous...
" friend."
What you spawn indise of me is indescribable in the least...
The happiness and joy you fill me with is incomparable...
Invincible...
Imeasurable...
Unimaginable.

It is pure and deep...
Strong and true...
Alive and magical...
Blissful and divine...
Praised and welcomed...
Everything and more...

It is just the beggining.

When you are near...
The world stops and is only you i see.

When you are afar...
My thoughts wander to you and i await the revival that your pressence brings.

When taken in your arms...
The warmth of your body pressed against ,ine steals my breath away...
Passion swelling up in my chest...
Barely contained...
To burst into the aqueducts of my tears...
Tears of joy...
Tears welcomed and cherished.

I am alive and anew!!

My heart stops with the touch of you lips...
The world explodes into vibrant colors and new life!
A kiss...
The kiss!
The one kiss that steals away from all others and returns my life to me.

Stars rain down from the heavens...
Like multifaceted diamonds sinking from unimaginable heights to dance around us on a gentle breaze.
They surround us...
Embrace us...
To carry us up into the clouds of our desires.

Lost amongst the stars we kiss...
An eternity trapped in an instant.
A small breath of a moment escaping like a gasp from the lungs of time.
Forever burned into our memory...
That everlasting kiss...
Swept away on a sea of feelings not yet recognized...
Yet still there.
The swells not yet receding from the storms of our pasts...
Yet sheltered by the safe harbors of our shared embrace...
We live on...
We love...
We care...

We are.

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© 2007 Ghost One
Published on Tuesday, September 25, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Ghost One On Tuesday, September 25, 2007, Ghost One (12)By person wrote:

    i do so apreciate comments... good or bad. they help me criticiz myself. lol and do mean alot to me. so please comment away... pretty please? lol ok sorry i'm not gonna beg for comments...

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, September 25, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    oh my fucking god...... if only i could write such magnanimous verse and prose.... i am in......f.u.c.k.i.n.g...a.w.e. for lack of better words

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