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"as always you take my focus out of the world and into a new and more beautiful demension,^^ glad to see you post again"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "Your Heart's Bow (Straight Shot in the Rain)" by Fading_Smile

"Indeed...at 17 u have such heart...i believe when yer legal i may have to look u up ;) haha *kiss* (on the cheek of course) ~Mel"
Posted by Karma Doll on "Your Heart's Bow (Straight Shot in the Rain)" by Fading_Smile

"Blake you always bring me to tears. You have such wisdom at 17, such passion, such pain, such love. You m'dear have left me speechless. *Bravo* Julia~ "
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Your Heart's Bow (Straight Shot in the Rain)" by Fading_Smile

"hey - welcome back, wondered where you weet young man. Ok, onto the delectable poem, I'm thinkin at your age you shouldn't be capable of grasping such feelings, such control and understanding - damns!! You might get a lady fanclub,you know - lucky you!!! "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Your Heart's Bow (Straight Shot in the Rain)" by Fading_Smile

""I want to drown in your eyes again/But I'm drowning in your memories" Ahhh...Yes, I know these words as truly as I know the shadows in the deepest corners of my mind. Gorgeously done. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Your Heart's Bow (Straight Shot in the Rain)" by Fading_Smile

"i think what i really love about your poetry is the perfect balance, you use a good and wide vocabulary but you write short and honest while being godly and graceful, it seems impossible but you do it everytime."
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "Funeral at my Place of Mistakes" by Fading_Smile

"jesus, how do you do this to me everytime???you make me feel it, the sorrow, the rage, the everything. damn you"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "I Will Always Bleed Ink" by Fading_Smile

"i will tell you honestly that ive never FELT this much from reading anything, the closest ive come till you is jenny holzer. your very inpressive"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "Smile in the Dark (I Only Smile in the Dark)" by Fading_Smile

"you keep capturing the unspeakable in words, your more than any feeble words can say^^"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "Hiding Behind the Picture Frame" by Fading_Smile

""Knock-knock suicide I'll lose my mind but not you Not here " you sir are deadly frustrating, ive been writing for longer but your so much better than me its maddening, and yet i can't stop reading.god bless you and your silver tongue"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "We Are All Lost in the Dark" by Fading_Smile

"this reminded me of the secret window very stringly but its so much better, your stealing my heart one word at a time."
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "There's a Cemetery Behind Your House" by Fading_Smile

"damn you man, you never stop amazing me, never. promise me you'll keep writing, i love the way you write. "
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "Burying Angels With Snow Shovels (You're the Angel Pt 2)" by Fading_Smile

"oh my god,the whole thing had a iron grip on my soul but that last line, that last line really braught it together,your amazing my dear"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "You're the angel I knew you were" by Fading_Smile

"oh sweety, i know how you feel. i don;t know if you actualy do this(i hope you don't, your too pretty to scar yourself up)but i can understand the release. anyway this one knocked me out."
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile

"You say red's your favorite color so refreshing in a black and white world but every bull charges at crimson scarlet horns impaling your artistic toil this stanza especially really got to me^^i llove d every word"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

"goddamn you, i have to agree with thelast comment, im smitten with the way you write. its haunting and beautiful in a way ive never seen before. your talent is frustrating and endearing"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "The Chord of You (Every Chord is You)" by Fading_Smile

"your metaphors paint a delicious scene of agony and a strange sense of beauty, but god i love it"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "I Watered Roses With Tears And All Save One Lived For Years" by Fading_Smile

"gods alive your amazing kid, i wish i had your talent, i think ive always loved your writing but i never knew it was you till i saw your page and recognized a poem^^"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face" by Fading_Smile

" Kind of like a car crash with two dead victims. Regardless of the weeping regard, we stare all the same. Numb because its not happening to us. Excellent write indeed. `Div"
Posted by Unknown on "The Chord of You (Every Chord is You)" by Fading_Smile

"I believe I've fallen for your poetry. There is such sadness...but you can't stop reading once you get started. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Chord of You (Every Chord is You)" by Fading_Smile

"A slightly Steven King twist struck me in the end. "I guess that's why you don't buy milk anymore..." Brilliant line if only I knew the meaning behind it....`Div"
Posted by Unknown on "There's a Cemetery Behind Your House" by Fading_Smile

"Hot damn. I could be quoting you for the rest of the day if I tried to pull out the lines that made my heart skip. Indeed you have found something here. `Div "
Posted by Unknown on "I Will Always Bleed Ink" by Fading_Smile

""for once I hoped love was blind" Beth is right, you have a way with endings."
Posted by Unknown on "Smile in the Dark (I Only Smile in the Dark)" by Fading_Smile

"trully captivating. "Im blinded by your perfect easel" Brilliant you've got real talent. ~Josh"
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Hiding Behind the Picture Frame" by Fading_Smile

""hairline fractured heart" & "I'd pull the moon closer to distract you from my arms"..beautiful. and you've quite a talent for ending a poem..like a cold slap. gorgeous write. "
Posted by Unknown on "Smile in the Dark (I Only Smile in the Dark)" by Fading_Smile

"You my dear are one of the best...17 and such wisdom in your veins..write on beautiful one ~Mel"
Posted by Karma Doll on "Smile in the Dark (I Only Smile in the Dark)" by Fading_Smile

""But the clouds selfishly took/the sky away from us/and for once I hoped love was blind" Damn...this...shit, I have no way to put my emotions into words. This is above and beyond any comment I could stutter out. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Smile in the Dark (I Only Smile in the Dark)" by Fading_Smile

"Beautiful.... "
Posted by Emma Lee on "Smile in the Dark (I Only Smile in the Dark)" by Fading_Smile

"*I just fell to the floor!* Damn Blake, you always make my heart stop for a second, and leave me at a loss for words, and breath! Love truly is feeling & not seeing. Beautiful! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Smile in the Dark (I Only Smile in the Dark)" by Fading_Smile

"This was a nice read. I especially like the last line."
Posted by ColdScaredAlone on "Tension Breaking Beauty in My Face" by Fading_Smile

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