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Funeral at my Place of Mistakes
By Fading_Smile
As stagnation sparked farewell
I reveled for my deepest footprint trodden
With eerie reminiscence, this standstill
Was everything but monotonous
I watched my earthen memories take in rain
Overflowing, eloping with my happiness
For sustenace alone, my liquid pain is dripping
In the shade of finality, I'm so asthentic
But the sun will still rise cutter red
I'll linger no more in this field of regret
Like trampled flowers, apologies can't go unsaid
So I shook off depression and took another step
I couldn't help but look back
I want to stand there again
If I can't
Then
Bury me there
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© 2006 Fading_Smile
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69)
wrote:
i think what i really love about your poetry is the perfect balance, you use a good and wide vocabulary but you write short and honest while being godly and graceful, it seems impossible but you do it everytime.
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On Wednesday, August 2, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
so many big words... so much time (to look it up in the dictionary)..lol.. it's good, if i understood the words.. lol
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On Tuesday, August 1, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Each step you take is a little victory. Walk on. Great write.
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A former member wrote:
You speak beyond your years with a voice like aged wine viewing the world with such weathered eyes through your descriptions. Do the world a favor and keep sharing. Good show ole man!
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On Tuesday, August 1, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Wow! Dark, complacent, true to your heart. I loved the imagery here also, the colors, vivid. Well done hun! Julia~
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