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Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin
By Fading_Smile
When the only reflective surface
is the razor in your room
and your teary eyes lose focus
as your mirror slices you
Your smile smells of indifference
since you played violin with knifes
the fire in your eyes dwindled
when you played a sad song on each thigh
You say red's your favorite color
so refreshing in a black and white world
but every bull charges at crimson
scarlet horns impaling your artistic toil
Unlike your beauty
the razor blade's skin deep
I'll carve your name into my heart
just don't play a song for me
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© 2006 Fading_Smile
Comments on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin"
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A former member wrote:
this actually made me tear up,,marvolous work man!!!
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69)
wrote:
You say red's your favorite color so refreshing in a black and white world but every bull charges at crimson scarlet horns impaling your artistic toil this stanza especially really got to me^^i llove d every word
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On Wednesday, July 19, 2006, sIo
(926) wrote:
that was a bombshell.
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A former member wrote:
i liked this, it drove deap, the last stanza was amazing, ~~GAP~~
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On Thursday, July 13, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
you have talent.. i can see in the depth of your heart you have it.. and your poems make sense.. some poems on here everyone is confused by them.. have you ever tried getting published?
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On Thursday, July 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was just incredible, I loved it was a good way to look at cutting and it just singed my soul ~nightly
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On Thursday, July 13, 2006, physicalgraffiti
(56) wrote:
Brillant. Really. Cutting seems so cleshe but it's always so strong to read about. Amazing job here.
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On Thursday, July 13, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Wow... that is so eerie-ly (sp.?) beautiful. I loved the next to last stanza. It is so true. Really outdone yourself here. *Bravo* Julia~
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A former member wrote:
Eloquently portrayed. The last stanza especially struck a note with me. Well done.
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