Burying Angels With Snow Shovels (You're the Angel Pt 2)

By Fading_Smile

Like making snow angels in July
you melted me for the summer
an eyeless expression for my coal heart
you’re my scarf and dammit I am dripping

You cried me another figurative river
but this time I sailed into September
like an insect lost in amber
I’ll give you my every winter

I would give you so much more

And though the sun may set at night
it’s fruitless to brave sleep when you burn brighter
showering in fireflies until dawn
you captured the most brilliant to hold

You captured my mind, my soul

And though you may not have the key to my heart
you have all the keys to my smile
you are the reddest rose I’ll never pick
so I’ll bury you in snow till I can’t get out my front door

The red fire, burning passion, I miss it
my eyes are now like ice, a compliment to your cold shoulder
I once was fiery, but now I am frozen
try to turn me back, it’s too late, I’m melting from your uncertainties

I’m Melting
Please Stop

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© 2006 Fading_Smile
Published on Sunday, July 2, 2006.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • BroKen-GlaSSHeArT On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT (69)By person wrote:

    damn you man, you never stop amazing me, never. promise me you'll keep writing, i love the way you write.

  • sIo On Wednesday, July 19, 2006, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    my eyes are now like ice, a compliment to your cold shoulder ....that. earned you a place on my favorites list.

  • A former member wrote: .."you are the reddest rose I’ll never pick so I’ll bury you in snow till I can’t get out my front door".. I am at a loss. I want to become lost in this.

  • A former member wrote: i love this i'm melting damn this is good

  • TaintedButterfly On Tuesday, July 4, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    "I'm melting from your uncertainties" omg, that line is extraordinary! Please don't melt away, because you are only just beginning to thrive. Excellent. Julia~

  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, July 4, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    daMN... this is so, unusal... and yet so real and there.. you have all the styles of your own mixed with some you mustve read.. anyways ,this is beyond out there.. nice write

  • A former member wrote: goddamn...there are sooooo many lines here that I could quote, but there's not enough room for me to rewrite the whole piece. This is especially sobering for me to read...because I know every feeling you've portrayed. This is an instant fave. ~*Beth*~

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