We Are All Lost in the Dark
By Fading_Smile
You're lost in the dark
with a sign that says "Help Me"
and I'm crawling on the ground
feeling for moisture so I might
follow your trail of tears
But that's near impossible when
I'm standing in a puddle of my own
with wide eyed remembrance
If only tears were flammable
cremation is a small sacrifice for reunitment
I used my last match just to
see the rainbow made by the mixture
of your liquid pain with my own
I want to find you, I need to find you
light a flare, your black-light smile
From my makeshift blood-trickle compass
to the scarred map on my arm
I'm lost in the thought
that I've lost you
I'm yelling the same joke
into the never-ending abyss of darkness
hoping to hear you laugh
Knock-knock suicide
I'll lose my mind but not you
Not here
Light is foreign, more like forgotten
I'm praying to spontaneously combust
in hope the last thing I see is you
Black turned grey, grey turned red
just as night turned morning
you found me and took me home
One night can be an eternity
You burn brighter than the sun
for that reason im blinded
I stared at you too long
I'm hiding in the dark
with a sign that says "Not Here"
My vision's long gone
and my eyes forever dry
But you found me that day
and you let me say
GOODBYE
Comments on "We Are All Lost in the Dark"
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On Saturday, October 21, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
psh im not lost ive got a match and an ipod and ill be fine
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69) wrote:
"Knock-knock suicide I'll lose my mind but not you Not here " you sir are deadly frustrating, ive been writing for longer but your so much better than me its maddening, and yet i can't stop reading.god bless you and your silver tongue
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A former member wrote:
I have to agree with sIo. Cant believe you've only been writing as long as you say. Much talent here. ~Lost
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On Wednesday, July 19, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
you're quite an amazing writer.
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On Sunday, July 16, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Good God that's powerful hun. I really am speechless. Talk about talent tenfold. You're the icing dear, and this piece, takes the cake!! *Bravo* Julia~
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On Saturday, July 15, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
damn... god damn.. jesus fucking christ.. you just got me. I felt like I was in the dark and I was searching for something i knew i couldnt find and the fact i was in love and not able to help it and just sit and wait for light.. god, you are an amazing w
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On Saturday, July 15, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
writer. I bow to you, you've got skills
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On Saturday, July 15, 2006, The Zebra Warrior
(1495) wrote:
amen you got skills..looking foward to some more!! Col...thanx for the bookmark, I swear to god after this write alone, if I had any left - you'd be there!!
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A former member wrote:
this is good; really good! loved how u ended this!