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"Reading those last two last six lines it was like watching your portrait (from your profile) being etched then erased before my eyes for your name's sake.. this was an emotionally overdriven write. Extremely powerful imagery. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

""My misunderstanding made it so much easier to pull the trigger..." This was wrenching and yet breathlessly unflawed. Great...."
Posted by kiss of the dark on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"i like the idea of not being able to die and wanting to, beacuse somtimes freedom is death alone,great write"
Posted by BroKen-GlaSSHeArT on "I Read Your Lips and Jumped Off Every Cliff" by Fading_Smile

"well, it was... i wish i could say fantastic, but it was okay for me.. i know you could do better.. somehow, for you, i would change it up a bit.. thats only my opinion.. otherwise, it was okay"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Snowflakes Melted In Your Eyes And I Died Inside" by Fading_Smile

"my eyes are now like ice, a compliment to your cold shoulder ....that. earned you a place on my favorites list. "
Posted by sIo on "Burying Angels With Snow Shovels (You're the Angel Pt 2)" by Fading_Smile

"jesus you know how to write a sad poem. "
Posted by sIo on "You're the angel I knew you were" by Fading_Smile

"that was a bombshell. "
Posted by sIo on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

"you're quite an amazing writer. "
Posted by sIo on "We Are All Lost in the Dark" by Fading_Smile

"quite crushing to me. "
Posted by sIo on "Snowflakes Melted In Your Eyes And I Died Inside" by Fading_Smile

"I love the giddyness and happy parts of this poem. The fun you were having...but at the end sadness. You my dear, are most definitely a talented writer. Great job hun! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Snowflakes Melted In Your Eyes And I Died Inside" by Fading_Smile

"Magical, though morose. I can't wash this sinking feeling. Beautiful imagery. A pleasure to read, as always. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Snowflakes Melted In Your Eyes And I Died Inside" by Fading_Smile

"The image i got from this work is amazing, just the use of words and the way they compliment others, amazing. Good write"
Posted by Unknown on "Snowflakes Melted In Your Eyes And I Died Inside" by Fading_Smile

"You asounding little lyrical beast. i think it's perfectly exceptable to mix seasons up. And this beaut ' snowballs in my mind...Fuckin' T for tremendous..nice."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Snowflakes Melted In Your Eyes And I Died Inside" by Fading_Smile

"Good God that's powerful hun. I really am speechless. Talk about talent tenfold. You're the icing dear, and this piece, takes the cake!! *Bravo* Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "We Are All Lost in the Dark" by Fading_Smile

"amen you got skills..looking foward to some more!! Col...thanx for the bookmark, I swear to god after this write alone, if I had any left - you'd be there!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "We Are All Lost in the Dark" by Fading_Smile

"writer. I bow to you, you've got skills"
Posted by mywristshurt on "We Are All Lost in the Dark" by Fading_Smile

"damn... god damn.. jesus fucking christ.. you just got me. I felt like I was in the dark and I was searching for something i knew i couldnt find and the fact i was in love and not able to help it and just sit and wait for light.. god, you are an amazing w"
Posted by mywristshurt on "We Are All Lost in the Dark" by Fading_Smile

"this is more than good; exceptional, I felt like I was trapped in a disturbed hitchhikers head as the narrator shifted around restlessly, fuckin brillinat write, vivid and atmospheric..nice one pal, tremendous!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "We Are All Lost in the Dark" by Fading_Smile

"this is good; really good! loved how u ended this!"
Posted by Unknown on "We Are All Lost in the Dark" by Fading_Smile

"i won't stay long except to say this is a an amazing write, because its triggering me, but its really good. ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

"i liked this, it drove deap, the last stanza was amazing, ~~GAP~~"
Posted by Unknown on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

"you have talent.. i can see in the depth of your heart you have it.. and your poems make sense.. some poems on here everyone is confused by them.. have you ever tried getting published?"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

"This was just incredible, I loved it was a good way to look at cutting and it just singed my soul ~nightly"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

"fuck...that last stanza. there it was. all the power in that poem. Shivers. Truthfully"
Posted by physicalgraffiti on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile

"Brillant. Really. Cutting seems so cleshe but it's always so strong to read about. Amazing job here."
Posted by physicalgraffiti on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

"Wow... that is so eerie-ly (sp.?) beautiful. I loved the next to last stanza. It is so true. Really outdone yourself here. *Bravo* Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

".."you are the reddest rose I’ll never pick so I’ll bury you in snow till I can’t get out my front door".. I am at a loss. I want to become lost in this. "
Posted by Unknown on "Burying Angels With Snow Shovels (You're the Angel Pt 2)" by Fading_Smile

"Intricately woven and evocative in the most heart rendering of ways. You've stolen my breath. So very well written."
Posted by Unknown on "You're the angel I knew you were" by Fading_Smile

"Eloquently portrayed. The last stanza especially struck a note with me. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Slow Dance to Your Razor Blade Violin" by Fading_Smile

"yeah, cutter poems=ick...but this somehow wasn't so bad, good work."
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile

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