Comments by All Members
- "Hehe I hve felt like that many a time, very nicely done. Portrays a primal instinct that mankind has suppressed for thousands of yeares."
Posted by Unknown on "Erruption of blood" by Silence
- "I really like the repeating thematic and linguistic structure/framework of each of your stanzas... and you really hit home with the final output... very skillfully done "
Posted by Riven Waker on "Pride's Folly" by Silence
- "2nd line in 2nd stanza...great. then that last line of the 2nd stanza...is very interesting. i read over that quite a few times. and then your succumbing and fighting...hmmm. very intense. really liked this piece."
Posted by RubyXero on "Lacking" by Silence
- "The lessons that we are taught growing up never leave us regardless of how wrong we know they are...This brought back some ghosts..."
Posted by Narcissa on "The Girl Daddy Made" by Silence
- "I used to hide under the bed and pray that my bogeyman would save me from the daddy...people can be such monsters :("
Posted by Unknown on "The Girl Daddy Made" by Silence
- "the nauseating mentality of a media whore.....the 'Spotlight' should beam microwaves ....i love this. "
Posted by elisa on "Walking Clock" by Silence
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