Erruption of blood
By Silence
I fall a broken man
I rise with the blood lusting animal
My hands gripping his throat
Squeezing so crimson runs out around my fingers
As he gasps his last breath
I turn my seething eye to you
I can see the terror in your face
And the pangs of arousal
Lunging forwards I grab hold of your body
I bite down on your neck
As you scream out I clench more
I dig the blood out like a drug
I slam you to the ground
Head jerking up as I let loose a primal roar
My blood dripping down on her cheek
From the knife you twisted in my back
I lick my lips slowly
My stained teeth forming to an evil smile
My fist coming down on the corpse
Bursting through the lung
I feel the blood splatered all over my skin
A shudder of pleasure
I turn to see
You back away in fear
Inching forwards I pick you up
Kissing you letting you taste yourself
I push you into the wall my body clinging to yours
My eyes purely lit with fury
Filled with fury and lust
Deep breathes heaving from my body
You scream out no
But I feel it deep in you
I was giving you what you wanted the whole time
You just didn’t think I had it in me
But I am not doing this for you
Only me and my wants
In the morning once I have a soul again I will feel sorrow
Till then I will take delight in the screams of horror and pleasure
Comments on "Erruption of blood"
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A former member wrote:
Wow.. Brutal, dark and very well penned.. That's pure animal lust and rawness.. :)
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A former member wrote:
Hehe I hve felt like that many a time, very nicely done. Portrays a primal instinct that mankind has suppressed for thousands of yeares.
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On Wednesday, October 24, 2007, Niemand
(355) wrote:
*smirks* LOVE IT LOVE IT! Have I mentioned that I love the way you think?-Airi
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A former member wrote:
cool. i love the lust and feeling. Every word screams anger.
~darkes :P
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On Saturday, July 1, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
this is really cool.. how did you come up with this? thats like erotic and horror mixed together.. which isn't bad, it just one of those poems about sadistic sex.. which is very fun.. i like the way you write
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On Thursday, June 22, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
I have to say this kind of turned me on*coughs* this was just incredible! I just wanted to get into it:P *giggles* well I think I will need to take a time out and a cold shower*Smiles evily*
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On Thursday, June 22, 2006, The Shattered Heart
(30) wrote:
Damn...That's all I can say is Damn.